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Feb. 20, 2021

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The Tale of the Heike

The Tale of the Heike is one of the Japanese classics that people study in school. The beginning is so famous that many people can recite it. The sentences have a particular rhythm, so it's easy to memorize. The content is also meaningful. I like the next two sentences; The arrogant do not prevail for long, nothing but a spring night’s dream. The mighty in time succumb, dust before the wind. When I learned it, I didn't understand what it says completely. I realized the excellence now.

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The Tale of the Heike

The Tale of the Heike is one of the Japanese classics that people study in school.

The beginning is so famous that many people can recite it.

The sentences have a particular rhythm, so it's easy to memorize.

The content is also meaningful.

I like the next two sentences; The arrogant do not prevail for long, nothing but a spring night’s dream.

The mighty in time succumb, dust before the wind.

When I learned it, I didn't understand what it saysit completely.

You could also say: what it means completely

I realized the its excellence now.

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Feb. 26, 2021

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Thank you so much!

The Tale of the Heike


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The Tale of the Heike is one of the Japanese classics that people study in school.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The beginning is so famous that many people can recite it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sentences have a particular rhythm, so it's easy to memorize.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The content is also meaningful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like the next two sentences; The arrogant do not prevail for long, nothing but a spring night’s dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The mighty in time succumb, dust before the wind.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I learned it, I didn't understand what it says completely.


When I learned it, I didn't understand what it saysit completely.

You could also say: what it means completely

I realized the excellence now.


I realized the its excellence now.

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