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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%)

The given table illustrates the percentage of water consumption for diverse purposes in four nations. Overall, there is an increase in the proportion of water use in Egypt, Saudi Arabica and New Zealand, with Egypt witnessing the most dramatic rise, while the opposite is true for Canada. In addition, agriculture constitutes the majority in all these four nations.

In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which exactly doubled that of New Zealand. By comparison, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are almost similar, at 8% and 6% respectively.

As regards industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%. Conversely, Egypt consumes the least amount of water for industry, just 10%.
Regarding agriculture, Egypt consumes a significant 82% of its water, while this figure for Saudi Arabia is much lower, at 64%. Whereas this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, Canada is the last position, which uses only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.

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The table below shows water use for different purposes in f

The table below shows water usage for differentvarious purposes in four different countries.

The use of water by four different countries (%) The given table illustrates the percentage of water consumption for diverse purposes in four nations.

Overall, there iwas an increase in the proportion of water usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabica and New Zealand, with Egypt witnessing the most dramatic rise, while the opposite iwas true for Canada.

Separating "..dramatic rise. The opposite was true for Canada, with the country experiencing the steepest drop in water consumption' might be better as its not the most clear as to what is happening in Canada. Is the water usage just falling? Or is Canada the country with the biggest drop?

In addition, agriculture constitutumes the majority of water in all these four nations.

In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which is exactly doubled that of New Zealand.

By comparison, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are almostwere similar, at 8% and 6% respectively.

AsIn regards to industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%.

Conversely, Egypt consumes the least amount of water for industry,ial purposes, at just 10%.

Regarding agriculture, Egypt consumes a significant 82% of its water, while thise figure for Saudi Arabia is much lower, at 64%.

WhereasFurther, this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, while Canada is in the last position, which usesusing only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.

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Water consumption is a pretty cool topic, well done!

The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries.

The use of water by four different countries (%) The given table illustrates the percentage of water consumption for diverse purposes in four nations.

Overall, there is an increase in the proportion of water use in Egypt, Saudi Arabica and New Zealand, with Egypt witnessing the most dramatic rise, while the opposite is true for Canada.

In addition, agriculture constitutes the majority in all these four nations.

In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which is exactly doubledtwice that of New Zealand.

By comparison, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are almost similar, at 8% and 6% respectively.

As regardsfor industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%.

Conversely, Egypt consumes the least amount of water for industry, just 10%.

Regarding agriculture, Egypt consumes a significant 82% of its water, while this figure for Saudi Arabia is much lower, at 64%.

Whereas this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, Canada is in the last position, which uses only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.

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lethanhhang

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Thank you so much.

The table below shows water use for different purposes in f


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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries.


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The table below shows water usage for differentvarious purposes in four different countries.

The use of water by four different countries (%) The given table illustrates the percentage of water consumption for diverse purposes in four nations.


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Overall, there is an increase in the proportion of water use in Egypt, Saudi Arabica and New Zealand, with Egypt witnessing the most dramatic rise, while the opposite is true for Canada.


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Overall, there iwas an increase in the proportion of water usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabica and New Zealand, with Egypt witnessing the most dramatic rise, while the opposite iwas true for Canada.

Separating "..dramatic rise. The opposite was true for Canada, with the country experiencing the steepest drop in water consumption' might be better as its not the most clear as to what is happening in Canada. Is the water usage just falling? Or is Canada the country with the biggest drop?

In addition, agriculture constitutes the majority in all these four nations.


In addition, agriculture constitutes the majority in all these four nations.

In addition, agriculture constitutumes the majority of water in all these four nations.

In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which exactly doubled that of New Zealand.


In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which is exactly doubledtwice that of New Zealand.

In terms of domestic use, the percentage of water use in Canada was the highest, at 20%, which is exactly doubled that of New Zealand.

By comparison, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are almost similar, at 8% and 6% respectively.


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By comparison, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are almostwere similar, at 8% and 6% respectively.

As regards industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%.


As regardsfor industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%.

AsIn regards to industrial activities, 70% of people in Canada use water for this purpose, followed by New Zealand and Saudi Arabia, with respective proportions of 46% and 30%.

Conversely, Egypt consumes the least amount of water for industry, just 10%.


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Conversely, Egypt consumes the least amount of water for industry,ial purposes, at just 10%.

Regarding agriculture, Egypt consumes a significant 82% of its water, while this figure for Saudi Arabia is much lower, at 64%.


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Regarding agriculture, Egypt consumes a significant 82% of its water, while thise figure for Saudi Arabia is much lower, at 64%.

Whereas this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, Canada is the last position, which uses only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.


Whereas this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, Canada is in the last position, which uses only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.

WhereasFurther, this sector accounts for 44% of water consumption in New Zealand, while Canada is in the last position, which usesusing only one-tenth of its water for agricultural purposes.

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