July 28, 2025
The sunset in the beach
Yesterday in the afternoon, i get to the beach to see the sunset. The sky was painted with tones of orange, pink and purple. The waves were breaking calmly in the sand, and the wind of the sea was fresh and joyfull. There was a few people, just some families and couples walking calmly. I felt a imense peace in that moment, watching the natural beauty. Is one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day.
O Pôr do Sol na Praia
Ontem à tarde, fui à praia ver o pôr do sol. O céu estava pintado com tons de laranja, rosa e roxo. As ondas quebravam suavemente na areia, e a brisa do mar era fresca e agradável. Havia poucas pessoas, apenas algumas famílias e casais caminhando tranquilamente. Senti uma paz imensa naquele momento, observando a beleza natural. É um dos meus lugares favoritos para relaxar e esquecer o estresse do dia a dia.
The sunset inat the beach
Typically you might see something like "Sunset at the Beach" without "the" but this sentence is fine!
Yesterday in the afternoon, iI geot to the beach to see the sunset.
The sky was painted with tones of orange, pink and purple.
The waves were breaking calmly ion the sand, and the wind of the seasea breeze was fresh and joyfull.
"Wind of the sea" works but "sea breeze" is the more common expression.
There wasere just a few people, just some families and couples walking calmly.
I felt an immense peace in that moment, watching the natural beautybeauty of nature.
"Natural beauty" just sounds wrong to me here.
It's one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day.
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The sunset ion the beach
Yesterday in the afternoon, iI geot to the beach to see the sunset.
The sky was painted with tones of orange, pink and purple.
The waves were breaking calmly in the sand, and the wind of the sea was fresh and joyfull.
There wasere a few people, just some families and couples walking calmly.
I felt an immense peace in that moment, watching the natural beauty.
It is one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day.
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The sunset in the beach The sunset The sunset Typically you might see something like "Sunset at the Beach" without "the" but this sentence is fine! |
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Yesterday in the afternoon, i get to the beach to see the sunset. Yesterday in the afternoon, Yesterday |
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The sky was painted with tones of orange, pink and purple. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The waves were breaking calmly in the sand, and the wind of the sea was fresh and joyfull. The waves were breaking calmly in the sand, and the wind of the sea was fresh and joyful The waves were breaking calmly "Wind of the sea" works but "sea breeze" is the more common expression. |
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There was a few people, just some families and couples walking calmly. There w There w |
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I felt a imense peace in that moment, watching the natural beauty. I felt an immense peace in that moment, watching the natural beauty. I felt an immense peace in that moment, watching the "Natural beauty" just sounds wrong to me here. |
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Is one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day. It is one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day. It's one of my favorite places to relax and forget the stress of the day-to-day. |
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