June 27, 2025
The Sunlight
I usually finish work around 6 p.m. My house is located about 20 minutes west of my workplace by car.
So on my way home, the setting sun shines directly into my eyes, and it's really dazzling.
My doctor told me I must always wear sunglasses because being exposed to bright light without them can increase my eye pressure.
However, even with sunglasses, the sunlight is terribly blinding at this time.
仕事が終わるのはだいたい６時ごろ。ぼくの家は職場から車で約２０分ぐらいの西に位置する。だから帰る時は西日がもろあたってまぶしい。裸眼では眼圧があがってしまうから必ずサングラスをしてと医師から言われている。しかし、今の季節サングラスしててもまぶしい。
My doctor told me that I must always wear sunglasses because being exposed to bright light without them can increase my eye pressure.
Completely optional. Both are okay. Adding that just makes you sentence easier to read.
Also, I think eye pressure is probably not the correct term. But I'm not a doctor haha. I'm just not sure that's what staring into the sun can cause.
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So good. Literally perfect.
June 28, 2025
Thank you for your correction.
I usually finish work around 6 p.m. My house is located about 20 minutes (to the) west of my workplace by car.
"To the west" is optional, but I think it sounds a little more natural here.
However, even with sunglasses, the sunlight is terribly blinding at this time.
June 28, 2025
Thank you for your correction.
The Sunlight
I usually finish work around 6 p.m. My house is located about 20 minutes west of my workplace by car.
So on my way home, the setting sun shines directly into my eyes, and it's really dazzling.
My doctor told me I must always wear sunglasses because being exposed to bright light without them can increase my eye pressure.
However, even with sunglasses, the sunlight is terribly blinding at this time.
June 28, 2025
Thank you.
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So on my way home, the setting sun shines directly into my eyes, and it's really dazzling. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My doctor told me I must always wear sunglasses because being exposed to bright light without them can increase my eye pressure. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My doctor told me that I must always wear sunglasses because being exposed to bright light without them can increase my eye pressure. Completely optional. Both are okay. Adding that just makes you sentence easier to read. Also, I think eye pressure is probably not the correct term. But I'm not a doctor haha. I'm just not sure that's what staring into the sun can cause. |
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However, even with sunglasses, the sunlight is terribly blinding at this time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, even with sunglasses, the sunlight is terribly blinding at this time. |
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I usually finish work around 6 p.m. My house is located about 20 minutes west of my workplace by car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I usually finish work around 6 p.m. My house is located about 20 minutes (to the) west of my workplace by car. "To the west" is optional, but I think it sounds a little more natural here. |
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