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The Summer is getting closer.

The Summer is getting closer.
In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.
Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish the moment.
I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me.
I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, hate how quickly the food can be rotten.
But still, I tried to bring some bright side before this essay became too pathetic.
I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon. Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.
If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choice for it, overwhelming and bold.

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The Summer is getting closer.

The Summer is getting closer.

In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.

I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.

Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.

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May 9, 2024

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In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.

I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me.

I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.

Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.

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The Summer is getting closer.


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The Summer is getting closer.


The Summer is getting closerapproaching. Summer is approaching.

Or: "Summer is getting closer and closer."

The Summer is getting closer. Summer is getting closer.

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In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.


In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here,: summer and winter. In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here: summer and winter.

Or: "...we often joke that we only have two seasons: summer and winter."

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Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish the moment.


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Fall and spring are almost too short to catch, sobut I will cherish the moment. Fall and spring are almost too short to catch, but I will cherish the moment.

Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish theeach moment. Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish each moment.

I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me.


I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for mthe weather will be unbearable for me after the Dragon Boat Festival in June. I believe the weather will be unbearable for me after the Dragon Boat Festival in June.

I added "in June" because many people don't know when it is :)

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I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard for me to bear for me. I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard for me to bear.

I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, hate how quickly the food can be rotten.


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But still, I tried to bring some bright side before this essay became too pathetic.


But still, I'm tried to bring somying to look on the bright side before this essay became too patheticwallowing in self-pity in this essay. But still, I'm trying to look on the bright side before wallowing in self-pity in this essay.

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But still, I triedwill try to bring in some bright sides before this essay becaomes too pathetic. But still, I will try to bring in some bright sides before this essay becomes too pathetic.

I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.


I admirlove the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon. I love the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.

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Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.


Their textures are soft and juicyy are soft, juicy, and luscious, like the season itself with a luscious vibe. They are soft, juicy, and luscious, like the season itself.

I wouldn't really call a watermelon's texture (even the inside) soft and juicy

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If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choice for it, overwhelming and bold.


If every season hasd its own color, I believethink red and orange willould be the goodbest choice for it,: overwhelming and bold. If every season had its own color, I think red and orange would be the best choice for it: overwhelming and bold.

If every season hasd its own color, I believe red and orange willould be thea good choice for it, overwhelming and bold. If every season had its own color, I believe red and orange would be a good choice for it, overwhelming and bold.

If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choices for itsummer, overwhelming and bold. If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be good choices for summer, overwhelming and bold.

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