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July 12, 2022

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the summer

I love the summer so much. The weather is so relax and warm the coolness wind in the air and the strong rain. I love summer two monts free from the school. In summer give it ice crem and soda and much of fun. It gives so much diffrent activities in summer like swimming , travel , go in the park, and many more. In summer is my Birtday on 31th august . But that is not all we traveled this summer to paris the capital of French . We have there many relatives and we was there not so long.

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tThe summer

The weather is so relaxnice and warm the coolness . The wind in the air is cool and there are strong rain.s.

I lohave summer two months free from the school in the summer.

In summer give it, you can buy ice cream and soda, and have so much of fun.

It givesThere are so muchany different activities in the summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and manyuch more.

In summer is mMy Bbirthday on 31th ais in the summer. It's August 31st.

But that i's not all we traveled this summer, this summer, we also traveled to pParis, the capital city of Freanch e.

We have there many relatives and we was there notthere, and we had not been in so long.

tThe summer

I love the summer so much.

The weather is so relax and warming, with the warmth and the coolness wind in the air, and the strong rain.

I love the summer, two months free from the school.

In summer give it, there’s ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun.

It giveThere’s so muchany diffrent activities in summer, like swimming , traveling , go ing to the park, and many more.

In summer, it is my Bbirthday on 31th aAugust .

But that is not all w. We traveled this summer to pParis, the capital of Freanche .

We have there many relatives there, and we waseren’t there not sofor very long.

tThe sSummer

In formal writing, we capitalize each word in the title, except for conjunctions and prepositions

The weather is so relaxed and warm the coolness wind in the air, except for when storms bring a cool wind and the strongavy rain.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. To me it makes the most sense if you tie the cool wind and heavy rain to storms, since otherwise it contradicts the previous statement about the weather being relaxed and warm. We say rain is "heavy," not "strong."

I love summer because it means two months free from the school.

"I love summer" is a full statement and thus needs a conjunction (or a colon) to link it with "two months free from school."

In sSummer give ithas ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun.

Es gibt = "there is" in English in most cases; you could say "In summer there is," though "Summer has" sounds more natural

It givesThere are so much different activities in summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and many more.

one goes "to" the park, rather than "in"

In summer is my Birtday on 31th aMy birthday is in summer, on August 31st.

"birthday" is a common noun and is not capitalized, "August" is a proper noun and is capitalized. "thirty-first" = 31st (you can also just write August 31, it's more formal)

But that is not all; we traveled this summer to pParis the capital of Freanch e.

"But that is not all" and "we traveled this summer to Paris the capital of France." are both complete sentences, but they can be joined with a semicolon to indicate that one necessarily follows the other. French = the language, France = the country

We have there many relatives and we was there not sothere, but we were not there for very long.

I love the summer so much.

The weather is so relaxing and warm: the coolness of wind in the air and the strong rain.

I love summer: two months free from the school.

In summer gi, I have it ice crem andam, soda, and mucha lot of fun.

It giveSummer has so muchany different activities in summer, like swimming , travel ling, go ing to the park, and many moreothers.

In summer is my Birtday on 31th august .

My birthday is in summer, on the 31st of August.

But that i's not all we traveled this summer: this summer, we travelled to pParis, the capital of Freanch e.

We have there many relatives and we wasthere. We weren't there not sofor long.

Connecting them with "and" suggests that you didn't stay there for long because you have many relatives there.

the summer


tThe sSummer

In formal writing, we capitalize each word in the title, except for conjunctions and prepositions

tThe summer

tThe summer

I love the summer so much.


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The weather is so relax and warm the coolness wind in the air and the strong rain.


The weather is so relaxing and warm: the coolness of wind in the air and the strong rain.

The weather is so relaxed and warm the coolness wind in the air, except for when storms bring a cool wind and the strongavy rain.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. To me it makes the most sense if you tie the cool wind and heavy rain to storms, since otherwise it contradicts the previous statement about the weather being relaxed and warm. We say rain is "heavy," not "strong."

The weather is so relax and warming, with the warmth and the coolness wind in the air, and the strong rain.

The weather is so relaxnice and warm the coolness . The wind in the air is cool and there are strong rain.s.

I love summer two monts free from the school.


I love summer: two months free from the school.

I love summer because it means two months free from the school.

"I love summer" is a full statement and thus needs a conjunction (or a colon) to link it with "two months free from school."

I love the summer, two months free from the school.

I lohave summer two months free from the school in the summer.

In summer give it ice crem and soda and much of fun.


In summer gi, I have it ice crem andam, soda, and mucha lot of fun.

In sSummer give ithas ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun.

Es gibt = "there is" in English in most cases; you could say "In summer there is," though "Summer has" sounds more natural

In summer give it, there’s ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun.

In summer give it, you can buy ice cream and soda, and have so much of fun.

It gives so much diffrent activities in summer like swimming , travel , go in the park, and many more.


It giveSummer has so muchany different activities in summer, like swimming , travel ling, go ing to the park, and many moreothers.

It givesThere are so much different activities in summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and many more.

one goes "to" the park, rather than "in"

It giveThere’s so muchany diffrent activities in summer, like swimming , traveling , go ing to the park, and many more.

It givesThere are so muchany different activities in the summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and manyuch more.

In summer is my Birtday on 31th august .


In summer is my Birtday on 31th august .

My birthday is in summer, on the 31st of August.

In summer is my Birtday on 31th aMy birthday is in summer, on August 31st.

"birthday" is a common noun and is not capitalized, "August" is a proper noun and is capitalized. "thirty-first" = 31st (you can also just write August 31, it's more formal)

In summer, it is my Bbirthday on 31th aAugust .

In summer is mMy Bbirthday on 31th ais in the summer. It's August 31st.

But that is not all we traveled this summer to paris the capital of French .


But that i's not all we traveled this summer: this summer, we travelled to pParis, the capital of Freanch e.

But that is not all; we traveled this summer to pParis the capital of Freanch e.

"But that is not all" and "we traveled this summer to Paris the capital of France." are both complete sentences, but they can be joined with a semicolon to indicate that one necessarily follows the other. French = the language, France = the country

But that is not all w. We traveled this summer to pParis, the capital of Freanche .

But that i's not all we traveled this summer, this summer, we also traveled to pParis, the capital city of Freanch e.

We have there many relatives and we was there not so long.


We have there many relatives and we wasthere. We weren't there not sofor long.

Connecting them with "and" suggests that you didn't stay there for long because you have many relatives there.

We have there many relatives and we was there not sothere, but we were not there for very long.

We have there many relatives there, and we waseren’t there not sofor very long.

We have there many relatives and we was there notthere, and we had not been in so long.

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