Nov. 6, 2024
The Struggles of Having a Baby Face
People usually say that having a young appearance has a lot of advantages. I agree, but only to a certain extent. My entire family has young faces, from my mother to my older sister. I'm not an exception. Being son of a third generation Japanese father and a well preserved mother who looks way younger than she actually is makes my face looks like I'm a 15 while I'm 21.
One of the worst parts of this is when I have to run some errands throughout the city so I have to interact with unknown people. They treat me like a child, I can clearly notice the tone change when someone start talking to me. That's why I started growing out facial hair (and failed miserably because of genetics), hoping people would take me at least a bit more seriously. My height is also way below average and this should be the part that most makes me feel like I'm a kid.
I remember this one class from a technical school I was attending, where one of the teachers was absent and we're free to get back home. I almost got stuck inside there just because I didn't look as an adult to the eyes of the school manager. I Had to beg him to believe me and he agreed only for that once. Since then, I always keep my ID Card inside my pocket when I'm not home.
I mean, the benefits of aging slowly are still great, but those other things are such a drag and I wish I had at least some extra 8 or 9 centimeters so I would get the overall male height.
The Struggles of Having a Baby Face
People usually say that having a young appearance has a lot of advantages.
I agree, but only to a certain extent.
My entire family has young-looking faces, from my mother to my older sister.
I'm not an exception.
Personally, i’d say “I’m no different.”
Being the son of a third generation Japanese father and a well preserved mother who looks way younger than she actually is makes my face looks like I'm a 15 while I'm actually 21.
One of the worst parts of this is when I have to run some errands throughout the city so I have to interact with unknown peoplestrangers.
They treat me like a child,. I can clearly notice the tone change when someone starts talking to me.
That's why I started growing out facial hair (and failed miserably because of genetics), hoping people would take me at least a bit more seriously.
I remember this one class from a technical school I was attending, where one of the teachers was absent and we're were dismissed/free to get backo home.
I almost got stuck inside there just because I didn't look aslike an adult toin the eyes of the school manager.
Since then, I always keep my ID Card inside my pocket when I'm not home.
You could potentially replace “I’m not home” with “I’m out.”
I mean, the benefits of aging slowly are still great, but those other things are such a drag and I wish I had at least some extra 8 or 9 centimeters so I would getreach the overall male height.
“Those other things” is correct, but you might want to say something slightly more high-level such “the downsides” or just mentioning them again.
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Very good!
Nov. 6, 2024
Thanks for your feedback! "the downsides" was the exact term I was looking for.
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People usually say that having a young appearance has a lot of advantages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I agree, but only to a certain extent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My entire family has young faces, from my mother to my older sister. My entire family has young-looking faces, from my mother to my older sister. |
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I'm not an exception. I'm no Personally, i’d say “I’m no different.” |
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Being son of a third generation Japanese father and a well preserved mother who looks way younger than she actually is makes my face looks like I'm a 15 while I'm 21. Being the son of a third generation Japanese father and a well preserved mother who looks way younger than she actually is makes m |
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One of the worst parts of this is when I have to run some errands throughout the city so I have to interact with unknown people. One of the worst parts of this is when I have to run some errands throughout the city so I have to interact with |
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They treat me like a child, I can clearly notice the tone change when someone start talking to me. They treat me like a child |
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That's why I started growing out facial hair (and failed miserably because of genetics), hoping people would take me at least a bit more seriously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My height is also way below average and this should be the part that most makes me feel like I'm a kid. |
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I remember this one class from a technical school I was attending, where one of the teachers was absent and we're free to get back home. I remember this one class from a technical school I was attending, where one of the teachers was absent and we |
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I almost got stuck inside there just because I didn't look as an adult to the eyes of the school manager. I almost got stuck |
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I Had to beg him to believe me and he agreed only for that once. |
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Since then, I always keep my ID Card inside my pocket when I'm not home. Since then, I always keep my ID Card in You could potentially replace “I’m not home” with “I’m out.” |
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I mean, the benefits of aging slowly are still great, but those other things are such a drag and I wish I had at least some extra 8 or 9 centimeters so I would get the overall male height. I mean, the benefits of aging slowly are still great, but those other things are such a drag and I wish I had at least some extra 8 or 9 centimeters so I would “Those other things” is correct, but you might want to say something slightly more high-level such “the downsides” or just mentioning them again. |
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