Oct. 4, 2020
the story from my granduncle #3
My granduncle's early immigrant life in Hong Kong was harsh. Because of his illegal identity, there didn't have many employers who would take a risk to hire him. He had lived in the street or basements. Every day, he had to wake up at 4, working at least 15 hours a day to cover his daily cost. His native language is Cantonese and he has more advantages compared with other new immigrants. Since he had married a native and got a legal identity, his life was getting better. He told me: “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding the agony in the bottom.”
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Because of his illegal identity, there didn't haveweren't many employers who would take a risk to hirerisk hiring him.
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His native language is Cantonese, and he hasd more advantages compared withto other new immigrants.
Since he had married a native and got a legal identity, his life whas geottingen better.
He told me:, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding to the agony inat the bottom.”
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Oct. 5, 2020
thank you~
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I fixed the title a bit differently from part 2 to give you another option!
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Or, "...who would risk hiring him".
He had lived ion the street or in basements.
Every day, he had to wake up at 4, working at least 15 hours a day to cover his daily cost.
His native language is Cantonese, and he hasd more advantages compared withto other new immigrants.
Since he hadAfter marriedying a native and got aaining legal identitystatus, his life was gettinggot better.
He told me:, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding to the agony inat the bottom.”
Oct. 4, 2020
thank you ~
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the story from my granduncle #3
I fixed the title a bit differently from part 2 to give you another option!
In English, you capitalize the first letter of all the nouns, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, verbs, etc, in the title, as well as the first word. |
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My granduncle's early immigrant life in Hong Kong was harsh. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of his illegal identity, there didn't have many employers who would take a risk to hire him. Because of his illegal Or, "...who would risk hiring him". Because of his illegal identity, there |
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He had lived in the street or basements. He He had to live |
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Every day, he had to wake up at 4, working at least 15 hours a day to cover his daily cost. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His native language is Cantonese and he has more advantages compared with other new immigrants. His native language is Cantonese, and he ha His native language is Cantonese, and he ha |
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Since he had married a native and got a legal identity, his life was getting better.
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He told me: “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding the agony in the bottom.” He told me He told me |
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