April 1, 2022
The Spring
Yesterday afternoon we had a rain with hail. The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted for fifteen minutes. Later, we could enjoy of a nice and sunny afternoon. Today is Friday and we have a very nice sun but with a strong wind. The temperature is coolder than usual, but for me, this weather is fantastic. The Spring is here.
The Spring
You don't need 'the' with spring
Yesterday afternoon we had a rain with hail.
The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted for fifteen minutes.
Later, we could enjoy of a nice and sunny afternoon.
Today is Friday and we have asome very nice sun but with a strong wind.
The temperature is coolder than usual, but for me, this weather is fantastic.
The Spring is here.
Feedback
I would suggest you review what words need what particles as that is where most of your errors are. Good linking of thoughts and sentences though. Keep it up
The Spring
En inglés, la temporada se suele utilizar sin el artículo. Cuando se utiliza "spring" con el artículo, la gente piensa en un resorte o en un muelle.
Yesterday afternoon we had a rain with hail.
The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted for fifteen minutes.
Later, we could enjoy of a nice and sunny afternoon.
Today is Friday and we have a very nice sun, but with a strong wind.
The temperature is coolder than usual, but for me, this weather is fantastic.
Or: colder, but cooler seems right :)
The Spring is here.
Feedback
Bon fet.
April 4, 2022
Moltes gràcies pels aclariments.
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The Spring
En inglés, la temporada se suele utilizar sin el artículo. Cuando se utiliza "spring" con el artículo, la gente piensa en un resorte o en un muelle.
You don't need 'the' with spring |
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Yesterday afternoon we had a rain with hail. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Yesterday afternoon we had |
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The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted for fifteen minutes. The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later, we could enjoy of a nice and sunny afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Later, we could enjoy |
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Today is Friday and we have a very nice sun but with a strong wind. Today is Friday and we have Today is Friday and we have |
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The temperature is coolder than usual, but for me, this weather is fantastic. The temperature is cool Or: colder, but cooler seems right :) The temperature is co |
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The Spring is here.
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