Sept. 1, 2021
The Sports Ground
In my university, a sports ground had been covered with soil one year ago. However, nobody has used the ground for a long time because all clubs haven't been active due to COVID-19, and the ground is covered with weeds now. The power of nature is strong.
InAt my university, athe sports ground had been covered with soil one year ago.
There's a little parsing issue that I'm not sure how best to correct.
I think I would probably say something like:
At my university, the sports ground had been covered with soil about a year ago.
or,
They covered the sports ground at my university about a year ago.
However, nobody has used the ground for a long time because all clubs haven't been active due to COVID-19, andso the ground iss are covered with weeds now.
Your English is not bad, this is more stylistic. Most English speakers will be able to fill in the gaps so you can cut the sentence up quite a bit. However, if you wish to keep it as it was, it's fine.
The power of nature is strong.
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I'm jealous of how good you are at grammar! I think you probably over-explain things that are easily understood, but again, this is purely stylistic.
Sept. 3, 2021
I'm glad to hear that. Thank you for the corrections!
The Sports Ground
InAt my university, a sports ground had beenwas covered with soil onea year ago.
However, nobody has used the ground for a long time because allthe clubs haven't been active due to COVID-19, and the ground is covered with weeds now.
The power of nature is strong.
Sept. 3, 2021
Thank you!
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In my university, a sports ground had been covered with soil one year ago.
There's a little parsing issue that I'm not sure how best to correct. I think I would probably say something like: At my university, the sports ground had been covered with soil about a year ago. or, They covered the sports ground at my university about a year ago. |
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However, nobody has used the ground for a long time because all clubs haven't been active due to COVID-19, and the ground is covered with weeds now. However, nobody has used the ground for a long time because However, nobody has used the ground for a long time Your English is not bad, this is more stylistic. Most English speakers will be able to fill in the gaps so you can cut the sentence up quite a bit. However, if you wish to keep it as it was, it's fine. |
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