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Yesterday I had to prepare some food for a picnic. Our friends circle in Germany is very multicultural with people from several countries. In those cases it is very typical that national dishes are prepared. So, I went for a classic of my country: the Spanish omelette or tortilla. In fact, this is THE national dish to me, then I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous way than other candidates. For instance, I consider gazpacho and paella more typical in southern Spain, although nowadays it is not unusual to find them in northern regions.

National dishes normally come from working classes and the Spanish tortilla is no different. There are several theories concerning the origin of the dish. The first written mention goes back to the nineteenth century. It is important to avoid confusion: the Spanish omelette is not the same as the one from Mexico and Central America.

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Yesterday I had to prepare some food for a picnic.

Our circle of friends circle in Germany is very multicultural with people from several countries.

InAt those cases it is veryese events, typical thatly national dishes are prepared.

So, I went for a classic of my country: the Spanish omelette or tortilla.

In fact, this is THE national dish to me,for me and then I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous way than other candidat, made in a similar manner unlike most other Spanish dishes.

Not sure what you mean by homogeneous- made the same way, using the same recipe perhaps

For instance, I consider gazpacho and paella more typical in southern Spain, although nowadays it is not unusual to find them in the northern regions.

National dishes normally come from the working classes and the Spanish tortilla is no different.

There are several theories concerning the origin of the dish.

The first written mentionreference goes back to the nineteenth century.

It is important to avoid confusion: the Spanish omelette is not the same as the one from Mexico and Central America.

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jfartogra

Sept. 28, 2023

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The Spanish tortilla (1)

Yesterday I had to prepare some food for a picnic.

Our friends circle in Germany is very multicultural, with people from several countries.

"friend circle" is a fixed phrase, and even though it's made up of multiple friends you still say "friend circle"

In thoese cases it is very typical that national dishes are prepared.

"These" makes it clearer that you're still talking about the situation you just described

So, I went for a classic of my country: the Spanish omelette or tortilla.

In fact, this is THE national dish to me, thensince I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous wayto be more widespread across Spain than other candidates.

"Homogeneous" isn't grammatically incorrect here, but I think "widespread" is closer to what you mean

For instance, I consider gazpacho and paella more typical in southern Spain, although nowadays it is not unusual to find them in northern regions.

National dishes normally come from working classes, and the Spanish tortilla is no different.

There are several theories concerning the origin of the dish.

The first written mention goes back to the nineteenth century.

It is important to avoid confusion: the Spanish omelette is not the same as the one from Mexico and Central America.

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jfartogra

Sept. 27, 2023

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Thanks a lot!

The Spanish tortilla (1)


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Yesterday I had to prepare some food for a picnic.


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Our friends circle in Germany is very multicultural with people from several countries.


Our friends circle in Germany is very multicultural, with people from several countries.

"friend circle" is a fixed phrase, and even though it's made up of multiple friends you still say "friend circle"

Our circle of friends circle in Germany is very multicultural with people from several countries.

In those cases it is very typical that national dishes are prepared.


In thoese cases it is very typical that national dishes are prepared.

"These" makes it clearer that you're still talking about the situation you just described

InAt those cases it is veryese events, typical thatly national dishes are prepared.

So, I went for a classic of my country: the Spanish omelette or tortilla.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In fact, this is THE national dish to me, then I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous way than other candidates.


In fact, this is THE national dish to me, thensince I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous wayto be more widespread across Spain than other candidates.

"Homogeneous" isn't grammatically incorrect here, but I think "widespread" is closer to what you mean

In fact, this is THE national dish to me,for me and then I have found it all over Spain in a more homogeneous way than other candidat, made in a similar manner unlike most other Spanish dishes.

Not sure what you mean by homogeneous- made the same way, using the same recipe perhaps

For instance, I consider gazpacho and paella more typical in southern Spain, although nowadays it is not unusual to find them in northern regions.


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For instance, I consider gazpacho and paella more typical in southern Spain, although nowadays it is not unusual to find them in the northern regions.

National dishes normally come from working classes and the Spanish tortilla is no different.


National dishes normally come from working classes, and the Spanish tortilla is no different.

National dishes normally come from the working classes and the Spanish tortilla is no different.

There are several theories concerning the origin of the dish.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The first written mention goes back to the nineteenth century.


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The first written mentionreference goes back to the nineteenth century.

It is important to avoid confusion: the Spanish omelette is not the same as the one from Mexico and Central America.


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