March 20, 2022
the Soviet Union in 1991
To take Generation Z down memory lane and to understand where we are coming from, let’s time-travel back to the Year 1991. A coup in Moscow was carried out against Mikhail Gorbachev, the then leader of the Soviet Union. Although the western world was head-scratching when he first came to power in 1985, Gorbachev immediately transfixed the entire world, including both the western world and the Soviet Union. Different from his predecessors, he appeared to be very charismatic; he talked and behaved like other western politicians. Gorbachev built a strong rapport with Regan and initiated an arm-reduction talk with NATO. The two campaigns brought up by him, "perestroika" and "glasnost", further astonished the western world. "Perestroika" is the word "reform" in Russian, and Gorbachev started to promote fundamental social restructuring in his country. With "glasnost", the word "free speech" in Russian, he pursued a society that is more tolerable to criticism and embraced more free-speech media outlets. He is a radical reformer at that time and no wonder he got huge push-back from vested interests and communist ideologues.
tThe Soviet Union in 1991
To take Generation Z down memory lane and to understand where we are coming from, let’s time-travel in time back to the Year 1991.
A coup iIn Moscow a coup was carried out against Mikhail Gorbachev, the then leader of the Soviet Union.
Although the western world was head-scratching its head when he first came to power in 1985, Gorbachev immediately transfixed the entire world, including both the western world and the Soviet Union.
Different from his predecessors, he appeared to be very charismatic; he talked and behaved like other western politicians.
'other' is redundant
Gorbachev built a strong rapport with Reagan and initiated an arms-reduction talks with NATO.
The two campaigns broughtinitiated up by him, "perestroika" and "glasnost", further astonished the western world.
"Perestroika" is the word "reform" in Russian, and Gorbachev started to promote fundamental social restructuring in his country.
With "glasnost", the wordmeaning "free speech" in Russian, he pursued a society that iwas more tolerablent to criticism and embraced more free-speech media outlets.
He iwas a radical reformer at that time and no wonder he got huge push-back from vested interests and communist ideologues.
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Well done. This is a complex text and the corrections I've made are minor and relate primarily to usage and style.
March 20, 2022
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the Soviet Union in 1991
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To take Generation Z down memory lane and to understand where we are coming from, let’s time-travel back to the Year 1991. To take Generation Z down memory lane and to understand where we are coming from, let’s t |
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A coup in Moscow was carried out against Mikhail Gorbachev, the then leader of the Soviet Union.
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Although the western world was head-scratching when he first came to power in 1985, Gorbachev immediately transfixed the entire world, including both the western world and the Soviet Union. Although the western world was |
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Different from his predecessors, he appeared to be very charismatic; he talked and behaved like other western politicians. Different from his predecessors, he appeared to be very charismatic; he talked and behaved like other western politicians. 'other' is redundant |
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Gorbachev built a strong rapport with Regan and initiated an arm-reduction talk with NATO. Gorbachev built a strong rapport with Reagan and initiated |
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The two campaigns brought up by him, "perestroika" and "glasnost", further astonished the western world. The two campaigns |
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"Perestroika" is the word "reform" in Russian, and Gorbachev started to promote fundamental social restructuring in his country. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With "glasnost", the word "free speech" in Russian, he pursued a society that is more tolerable to criticism and embraced more free-speech media outlets. With "glasnost", |
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He is a radical reformer at that time and no wonder he got huge push-back from vested interests and communist ideologues. He |
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