Jan. 27, 2025
The snow
When I was kid, i always tried to wondering how the snow can be. In some movies, the snow always look perfect; the perfect white color, the cold weather and everything. When I saw the snow the first time, I had the same expectation like a kid during Christmas period. After some hours, I discover the snow can be dirt. The perfect white become something I never think. Since that day, I understand white can be dirty more.
When I was kid, i always tried to wonderingimagine how the snow can bewould look.
In some movies, the snow always looks perfect; the with a perfect white color, the cold weather and everything.
You wouldn't normally list "the cold weather" here, as you're describing how the snow looks, and the weather is a bit more abstract than that.
When I saw the snow the first time, I had the same expectation likeas a kid during Christmas period.
After some hours, I discovered theat snow can be dirty.
The perfect white snow becoame something I never thinkexpect.
I tried to minimize how much I rewrote the sentence, so this version is correct, but it would also be more natural as "I stopped expecting the perfect white snow"
Since that day, I understand whitemore that snow can be dirty more.
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It's usually a volume thing in my experience. You need a decent amount of snow for it to be _that_ white. Also it does get dirtier looking as time goes on as it partially melts and debris lands on top or rises to the surface. Most of the time the snow here is very light, so it ends up looking very dirty, but sometimes we get heavier snow and it's more like snow you would see in movies.
The snow
When I was kid, iI always tried to wonderinged how the snow can be.
Can be what?😁
In some movies, the snow always looked perfect; the perfect white color, the cold weather and everything.
When I saw the snow the first time, I had the same expectation like a kid during Christmas period.
After some hours, I discover the snow can be dirt.
The perfect white can become something I never thinkought of.
Since that day, I understand white can be dirty moreier.
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After some hours, I discover the snow can be dirt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After some hours, I discovered th |
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