March 29, 2022
The Slapping
At a first moment I thought that the hit of Will Smith to Chris Rock was a simple performance. But watching the speech of Smith when he was picking up his Oscar, all seems that was real. But I find some things odd. For instance, when Will Smith went back, he seems smiling. The hit was a little how in the movies, and with the open hand. I think he don't want harm him in any moment. for me is a way to show in public his disagreement for a graceless joke.
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But watching the speech of Smith when he was picking up his Oscar, allit seems that wasit was all real.
your first sentence is in past tense, so this one should be too. however, you are narrating in present tense ("it seems"). it's confusing!
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March 30, 2022
Thanks a lot.
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The Slapping |
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At a first moment I thought that the hit of Will Smith to Chris Rock was a simple performance. At |
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But watching the speech of Smith when he was picking up his Oscar, all seems that was real. But watching the speech of Smith when he was picking up his Oscar, your first sentence is in past tense, so this one should be too. however, you are narrating in present tense ("it seems"). it's confusing! |
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But I find some things odd. |
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For instance, when Will Smith went back, he seems smiling. For instance, when Will Smith went back, he seem past tense -- "went" |
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The hit was a little how in the movies, and with the open hand. The hit was a little |
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I think he don't want harm him in any moment. I think he don't want to seriously harm him |
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for me is a way to show in public his disagreement for a graceless joke.
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