Sept. 3, 2020
The secrets to keep happy
The secrets to keep happy.
You don’t expect that the money you have spent can go back.
You don’t expect anyone for anything.
If you lost everything you ever have, you should be able to set that up again.
If it’s possible, you better speak as less as you can.
Don’t hope too much.
The secrets to keepstaying happy
"keep" is usually transitive (keep a child happy, keep yourself occupied, etc), so you could say "keeping yourself happy"
You dDon’t expect thato get back the money you have spent can go back.
You dDon’t expect anyone for anythingthing from anyone.
Or "don't expect anyone to do/be anything for you"
If you loste everything you ever have, you should be able to set thabuild it up again.
The meaning of "should" is unclear here so this doesn't sound like advice. Maybe say "Always be prepared to lose everything and have to start over from scratch." or "Remember that even if you lose everything you have, you can still build it up again" or a combination of the two: "Remember that you might lose everything you have, so always be prepared to build up again from scratch".
If it’s possible, you better speak as less as you canSpeak as little as possible.
Don’t hope too much.
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This is good advice and you communicated it well. Good job!
Sept. 3, 2020
谢谢你的修改，它对我帮助很大。
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Don’t hope too much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The secrets to keep happy The secrets to "keep" is usually transitive (keep a child happy, keep yourself occupied, etc), so you could say "keeping yourself happy" |
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The secrets to keep happy. |
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You don’t expect that the money you have spent can go back.
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You don’t expect anyone for anything.
Or "don't expect anyone to do/be anything for you" |
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If you lost everything you ever have, you should be able to set that up again. If you los The meaning of "should" is unclear here so this doesn't sound like advice. Maybe say "Always be prepared to lose everything and have to start over from scratch." or "Remember that even if you lose everything you have, you can still build it up again" or a combination of the two: "Remember that you might lose everything you have, so always be prepared to build up again from scratch". |
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If it’s possible, you better speak as less as you can.
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