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The Secret of Lumisueños ✨
Last night, I dreamed about a word that doesn't exist: Lumisueño. It was something between light and wish, a spark that appeared just before a dream was realized. In my story, a girl found a Lumisueño in the forest whenever she believed all hope was lost. She kept it in a small glass jar, and she used it when she needed hope. Over the years, she discovered that Lumisueños didn't come from the forest, but it became from her own heart.
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El secreto de los lumisueños ✨
Anoche soñé con una palabra que no existía: Lumisueño. Era algo entre una luz y un deseo, una chispa que aparecía justo antes de cumplir un sueño. En mi cuento, una niña encontraba un Lumisueño en el bosque cada vez que creía que todo estaba perdido. Lo guardaba en un frasquito de cristal y lo usaba cuando necesitaba esperanza. Con los años descubrió que los Lumisueños no venían del bosque, sino de su propio corazón.
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It was something between light and a wish, a spark that appeareds just before a dream wais realized.
In my story, a girl found a Lumisueño in the forest whenever she believed that all hope was lost.
She kept it in a small glass jar, and she used it when she needed hope.
Over the years, she discovered that “Lumisueños” didn'on’t come from the forest, but it became from her own heart.
The Secret of Lumisueños ✨
Last night, I dreamed about a word that doesn't exist: Lumisueño.
It was something between light and a wish, a spark that appeared just before a dream was realized.
normally you would say “a wish” , unless you mean “hope” in the situation: “something between light and hope” would fit better
In my story, a girl found a Lumisueño in the forest whenever she believed all hope was lost.
She kept it in a small glass jar, and she used it when she needed hope.
Over the years, she discovered that Lumisueños didn't come from the forest, but it became from her own heart.
“became” past tense of “become”, means that something has started to be that wasn’t before. e.g: “she became fond of him after he bought her flowers”.
Lumisueños CAME from her own heart.
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It was something between light and wish, a spark that appeared just before a dream was realized. It was something between light and a wish, a spark that appeared just before a dream was realized. normally you would say “a wish” , unless you mean “hope” in the situation: “something between light and hope” would fit better It was something between light and a wish, a spark that appear |
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Over the years, she discovered that Lumisueños didn't come from the forest, but it became from her own heart. Over the years, she discovered that Lumisueños didn't come from the forest, but it “became” past tense of “become”, means that something has started to be that wasn’t before. e.g: “she became fond of him after he bought her flowers”. Lumisueños CAME from her own heart. Over the years, she discovered that “Lumisueños” d |
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