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Nice video! Very natural. Here is my most recent video:
https://www.tnewfields.info/BlueEarth/Video/Newfields-unrav.mp4

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I’m sorry you’re sick and hope you get well soon!

I love your video and the dubbing is great, but since you specifically requested feedback, I’ll offer a couple points: 🙂

• Terrace: The usage of this term probably differs from region to region. For me, a terrace at a hotel is a large, flat outdoor area that’s accessible from the public areas of the hotel. A smaller version that is only accessible from an individual room is usually (in my experience) called a balcony, especially if it’s elevated above the ground level.

• “scenery became gentle” – “gentle” seems odd here. My suggestion: “the colors of the surrounding scenery softened.”

These were the only two things that I noticed.

The gorgeous sunset view was a nice surprise at the end of the video. I watched it several times so I could pause at that point and take it in. Even the power pylons in the background look beautiful in that light! I’ll rewatch this video on my TV tonight so I can enjoy it on a bigger screen.

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你的英文真的好！视频里你说：“Sunset was there just beside us" 可能 ”just in front of us“ 比较好。"Beside" sounds like the sun is very close to you, e.g. the bird was right beside me, I would imagine it is maybe 1 metre from you. But the sun is quite far, although you can see it very clearly. Sorry I tried to practice my chinese and gave up halfway hahahahah.