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The second day diary
I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Caffe shop in the morning.
The system noticed my Must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website.
So I find three article to correct it and I got a right to continues my writing my diary.
I read a digital book by kindle about American history.
It was a write from China immigrate to American and wrote some letter to her friend.
The author told her friend some rule and law about American political.
I am very interesting this topic book.
I have read this book over 50 percent use one day.
I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Caffe shop in the morning.
I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Coffee shop in the morning.
The system noticed my Must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website.
The system noticed my must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website.
I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Cacoffee shop in the morning.
'continue start' clashes. It could be either word, but not both together.
You could say 'I start by continuing practicing my English writing...' but it feels very long.
The system noticed my 'Must correct other person article' when I preparedwent to write on this website.
So I find three articles to correct it, and I got a rightwas allowed to continues my writing my diary.
articles - it's the plural, don't forget the 's'.
'I got the right to continue' -> 'I had the right to continue'. But 'I was allowed to continue' sounds more like everyday language. 'I had the right to continue' sounds very formal or technical.
I read a digital book by kindle about American history.
It was a write fromten by a Chinaese immigrante to American and she wrote somea letter to her friend.
The author told her friend some rules and laws about American politicals.
rules and laws, plural.
I am very interested ing this topic book.
You could also say 'I am very interested in the topic of this book'.
I ha've read this book over 50 percent useof this book in one day.
I've read over 50 percent of this book in one day. -> I think this is what you mean - this means you read more than half of the book in one day.
'I've spent over half the day reading this book' -> this would mean you used more than half of the day to read the book.
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The second day diary |
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I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Caffe shop in the morning. I continue 'continue start' clashes. It could be either word, but not both together. You could say 'I start by continuing practicing my English writing...' but it feels very long. I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Caffe shop in the morning. I continue start to practice my English writing in the same Coffee shop in the morning. |
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The system noticed my Must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website. The system noticed my 'Must correct other person article' when I The system noticed my Must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website. The system noticed my must correct other person article when I prepared to write on this website. |
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So I find three article to correct it and I got a right to continues my writing my diary. So I find three articles to correct articles - it's the plural, don't forget the 's'. 'I got the right to continue' -> 'I had the right to continue'. But 'I was allowed to continue' sounds more like everyday language. 'I had the right to continue' sounds very formal or technical. |
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I read a digital book by kindle about American history. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a write from China immigrate to American and wrote some letter to her friend. It was |
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The author told her friend some rule and law about American political. The author told her friend some rules and laws about American politic rules and laws, plural. |
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I am very interesting this topic book. I am very interested in You could also say 'I am very interested in the topic of this book'. |
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I have read this book over 50 percent use one day. I I've read over 50 percent of this book in one day. -> I think this is what you mean - this means you read more than half of the book in one day. 'I've spent over half the day reading this book' -> this would mean you used more than half of the day to read the book. |
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