I would like to write about my school system to see which grammarhow I need to improve my grammar.

First of all, I'm livinge in Germany.

As a consequences from the Second World War, the government back then decided to use the federal system back then and up toill now, every state has a different school system.

For example, Hamburg has only has two school forms, which are "die Stadtteilschule und das Gymnasium.

After that, you can either start an apprenticeship or absolve an "Abitur"/A level , if you meet the requirements, but that’s where the systems also differ.

You can absolve an Abitur/A-Level by reaching 60% in German,English and Mathematics and, or other conditions like compensating a bad mark with a good mark, which also works also for the previously mentioned subjects.

To study here, you canare allowed to have a mark between 40%-60% in the main subjects, whatich is the only difference of requirements from the boboth the A-Levels.

I would like to write about my school system to see which grammar I need to improvehow I can improve my grammar.

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As I know this is common all over Germany, but I saw that everyone has different school forms when looking up information for this post.

But there is something I saw by looking up for information for this post.

Everyone has different school forms.

For example, Hamburg has only two school forms, which are "die Stadtteilschule und das Gymnasium v1" while my state has four.

das Gymnasium "v1 ,my state has four.

After that, either you can start an apprenticeship or absolreceive an "Abitur"/A level , if you meet the requirements, but that’s where the systems also differ.

You can absolrecieve an Abitur/A-Level by reaching 60% in German, English and Mathematics and, or other conditions like compensating a bad mark with a good mark, which also works also for the previously mentioned subjects.

There are two different types of A-Level, one is specific forto professions (? ), which includewhich allows education in a college for further education ( it says of further education in dict but I learned it with for from my English book)called "Fachoberschule".

It is called “Fachoberschule”.

To study here, you can allow tomay have a mark between 40%-60% in the main subjects, whatich is the only difference of requirements from the both A-Level.

I would like to finish'll end it here, otherwise the text would be too long. :) I hope you enjoyed it and hope I could inform you roughly about the education systems.

As consequences from the Second World War, the government back then decided to use the federal system and up to, but now, every state has a different school system.

For example, Hamburg has only two school forms, which are "die Stadtteilschule" und

I would like to write about my school system to see which grammarat I need to improve. with my grammar.

First of all, I'm livinge in Germany.

You always say "I live in _____" when talking about your residence.

As consequences ofrom the Second World War, the government back then decided to use the federal system, and up to now, every state has a different school system.

In my state, students go to school, which you startcan start school at the age of 6, until the tenth grade or until they reaching the age of 18, when youif they can't pass a class two times in your school career.

Changed it to sound smoother. Also, since you said "students", the pronoun should be "they" instead of "you".
I think you wanted to say "if they can't pass...", if meaning that the graduation date depends on whether or not they can't pass a class two times or not.

As I know, this is common all over Germany.

But, there is something I saw bywhen I was looking up for information for this post.

For example, Hamburg has only two school forms, which are "die Stadtteilschule und das Gymnasium ^v1", while my state has four.

Since you are comparing the two, I said "..., while my state has four." Without the while, it doesn't sound right.
The ^ means that the "v1" should be a superscript (a smaller text on top of the word), but I can't do that on here.

das Gymnasium "v1 ,my state has four.

After that, you can either start an apprenticeship or absolreceive an "Abitur"/A level , if you meet the requirements, but that’s where the systems also differ.

Since you are giving two options, you should say "either ... or", just like you'd say "entweder ... oder" in German.
"absolve" means to "declare (someone) free from guilt, obligation, or punishment", so it doesn't work here. I said receive instead.

You can absolreceive an Abitur/A-Level by reaching 60% in German, English and Mathematics, ands well as other conditions like compensating a bad mark with a good mark, which works also for the previously mentioned subjects.

I changed the "and" at the end of your list to "as well as". Since you were done with your first list, you should distinguish the two from each other.

There are two different types of A-Level, o. One is specific for professions (? ), which includes education inmeans the student can attend a college for further education ( it says of further education in dict but I learned it with for from my English book).

Changed the sentence to sound smoother. We try to avoid saying the same word in the same sentence if we can, but obviously you can't always avoid it.

To study here, you can allow to have a mark between 40%-60% in the main subjects, whatich is the only difference of requirements frombetween the bothtwo A-Levels.

You say "there's a difference between two ____", just like you'd say "es gibt einen Unterschied zwischen _____"

I would like to finish it here, otherwise the text would be too long :) I hope you enjoyed it, and I hope I couldwas able to inform you roughly about the education systems.