April 17, 2024
The Pain Of Unrequited Love
We may have all heard this bitter sweet poem.
Knowing that love sickness is painful,
why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation,
it is better to love and long for each other.
What's so good about lovesickness?Of course,compared with unrequited love.Mutually consenting is far nobler than one sided love.How can a straight dog that nobody wants compare to the happiness of a domestic dog that rubs against its master's feet?
Love may one day turn to resentment.Two people can become enemies.But one sided love can drive people crazy.
A few days ago,a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me,telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate.The girl was originally very kind to him.However,he demanded more and more from her,even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas.Since he didn't get it,he lost his temper with her.As a result,she was so angry that she left.
A carpet is something to be walked on.However,he called himself a carpet.Though not to the point of being crazy,
he also became a little humble straight dog.
The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love.How can one sided love have any demands?All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return,only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward.
Only in the dead of night,can I wipe my wounds while reading this poem that I have revised.
Knowing the pain of love sickness,
why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation,
still I yearn for you.
The Pain Of Unrequited Love
We may have all heard this bitter sweet poem.
Knowing that love sickness is painful, why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation, it is better to love and long for each other.
What's so good about lovesickness? Of course, compared withto unrequited love.M, mutually consenting is far nobler than one sided love.How can a straighty dog that nobody wants compare to the happiness of a domestic dog that rubs against its master's feet?
The sentence "Of course,compared with unrequited love." is an incomplete thought.
I know what you mean by "domestic dog" but that phrasing is more like domesticated animal. I think it is ok to just use "to the happiness of a dog that rubs against its master's feet"
Love may one day turn to resentment.Two people can become enemies.But one sided love can drive people crazy.
A few days ago, a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me, telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However, he demanded more and more from her,. He even commanded her to knit a scarf for him atfor Christmas.Since he didn't get it,he lost his temper with her.As a result,she was so angry that she left.
He sounds like a jerk!
A carpet is something to be walked on.However,he called himself a cCarpet.Though not to the point of being crazy,
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he also became a little humble straighty dog.
The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love.How can one sided love have any demands?All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return,only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward.
Only in the dead of night,can I wipe my wounds while reading this poem that I have revised.
Knowing the pain of love sickness, why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation, still I yearn for you.
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Really impressive poem! Make sure to include spaces after punctuation.
April 19, 2024
Thank you so much💐 I will keep it in mind
The Pain Of Unrequited Love
We may have all heard this bitter sweet poem.
Knowing that love sickness is painful, why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation, it is better to love and long for each other.
What's so good about love-sickness? Of course,compared with unrequited love. Mutually consenting is far nobler than one sided love. How can a straight dog that nobody wants compare to the happiness of a domestic dog that rubs against its master's feet?
Love may one day turn to resentment. Two people can become enemies. But one sided love can drive people crazy.
A few days ago,a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me,telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However,he demanded more and more from her, even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas. Since he didn't get it,he lost his temper with her. As a result,she was so angry that she left.
A carpet is something to be walked on. However, he called himself a carpet. Though not to the point of being crazy,
¶
he also became a little humble straight dog.
The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love. How can one sided love have any demands? All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return, only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward.
"How can one sided love have any demands?"
Damn straight! Imagine having a crush on someone and then making demands. As if the person owes you anything.
Only in the dead of night,can I wipe my wounds while reading this poem that I have revised.
Knowing the pain of love sickness, why do you pine away for love?
After much deliberation, still I yearn for you.
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Did you write this poem? If so, that's really, REALLY impressive. I have never heard such a moving poem before. I also have a crush on someone right now, but I keep it to myself entirely. I don't ask for anything in return; her smile in itself is its own reward.
April 17, 2024
Oh,it's an article written by my favorite author.I like the philosophy in it and tried to translate it from Chinese into English.I'm so glad that you like it😊
The Pain Of Unrequited Love
We may have all heard this bitter sweet poem.
Knowing that love sickness is painful,
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why do you pine away for love?
pine = " to long for, to desire from afar"
pine away = "to waste, decline, dimish"
I don't hear the phrase "pine away" often so I had to google to see if it's normally used. It seems that "pine away" has a different meaning to "pine". Either of these options can be used but I think it depends on which meaning you intended on using.
After much deliberation, it is better to love and long for each other.
What's so good about lovesickness? Of course, compared with unrequited love.M, mutually consenting love is far nobler than one sided love. How can a straighty dog that nobody wants compare to the happiness of a domestic dog that rubs against its master's feet?
Love may one day turn to resentment. Two people can become enemies. But one sided love can drive people crazy.
A few days ago, a boy using the name 'Carpet' wrote to me, telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However, he demanded more and more from her, even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas. Since he didn't get it, he lost his temper with her. As a result,she was so angry that she left.
A carpet is something to be walked on. However,he called himself a carpet. Though not to the point of being crazy,
¶
he also became a little humble straighty dog.
The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love. How can one sided love have any demands? All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return, only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward.
Only in the dead of night, can I wipe my wounds while reading this poem that I have revised.
Is this a poem that you made? Do you mean "revise" in that you are making corrections to it or do you mean "revise" in that you are learning how to recite the poem?
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This was a very interesting post! Very well written!
April 17, 2024
Thank you for your careful correction.It's an article written by my favorite author.I like the philosophy in it very much and I'm trying to translate it from Chinese into English.
いつも親切に助けてくれて、どうもありがとうございました💐
April 17, 2024
It's no problem at all! That author seems very thoughtful! I think I also like that philosophy! どういたしまして！
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The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love.How can one sided love have any demands?All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return,only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward. The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love. How can one sided love have any demands? All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return, only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward. The young boy simply doesn't understand the rules of unrequited love. How can one sided love have any demands? All unrequited love in the world can only give silently without asking for anything in return, only able to go through fire and water for the other party without daring to claim the reward. "How can one sided love have any demands?" Damn straight! Imagine having a crush on someone and then making demands. As if the person owes you anything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Knowing that love sickness is painful, why do you pine away for love? Knowing that love sickness is painful, pine = " to long for, to desire from afar" pine away = "to waste, decline, dimish" I don't hear the phrase "pine away" often so I had to google to see if it's normally used. It seems that "pine away" has a different meaning to "pine". Either of these options can be used but I think it depends on which meaning you intended on using. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Love may one day turn to resentment.Two people can become enemies.But one sided love can drive people crazy. Love may one day turn to resentment. Two people can become enemies. But one sided love can drive people crazy. Love may one day turn to resentment. Two people can become enemies. But one sided love can drive people crazy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few days ago,a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me,telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate.The girl was originally very kind to him.However,he demanded more and more from her,even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas.Since he didn't get it,he lost his temper with her.As a result,she was so angry that she left. A few days ago, a boy using the name 'Carpet' wrote to me, telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However, he demanded more and more from her, even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas. Since he didn't get it, he lost his temper with her. As a result,she was so angry that she left. A few days ago,a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me,telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However,he demanded more and more from her, even commanded her to knit a scarf for him at Christmas. Since he didn't get it,he lost his temper with her. As a result,she was so angry that she left. A few days ago, a boy using the name Carpet wrote to me, telling me that he has a crush on a female classmate. The girl was originally very kind to him. However, he demanded more and more from her He sounds like a jerk! |
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A carpet is something to be walked on.However,he called himself a carpet.Though not to the point of being lovesick, he also became a little humble straight dog. |
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