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I was so upset today because my supervisor pick at me. And it was not critical comments to project, it was a joke about what and how I told. And he named one women like “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.
I remembered that “if you wanna go to be angry about words - it means that people can control you” and I don’t like it. I want to be independent.

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I was so upset today because my supervisor pick ated on me.

And it wasthey were not critical comments abouto project, it was a joke about what and how I toldsaid it.

And he namcalled one women likea “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.

I remembered that “if you wanna go to be angry about words - it means that people can control you” and I don’t like it.

I want to be independent.

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I was so upset today because my supervisor picked at me.

And iIt was not the critical comments to project, but it was a joke about what I said and how I toldsaid it.

And hHe named one of the women like “sheep,-and I felt myself disgusted, i. It was not a correct thing to say.

I remembered that “if you wanna go to be angry about words -, it means that people can control you,” and I doidn’t like ithat.

I want to be independent.

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I was so upset today because my supervisor picked at me.

And it was not a critical comments to project, it was a joke about what and how I toldsaid something.

And he named one of the women like “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.

I remembered that “if you wanna go toand be angry about words - it means that people can control you” and I don’idn't like it.

I want to be independent.

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I was so upset today because my supervisor pick at me.


I was so upset today because my supervisor picked at me.

I was so upset today because my supervisor picked at me.

I was so upset today because my supervisor pick ated on me.

And it was not critical comments to project, it was a joke about what and how I told.


And it was not a critical comments to project, it was a joke about what and how I toldsaid something.

And iIt was not the critical comments to project, but it was a joke about what I said and how I toldsaid it.

And it wasthey were not critical comments abouto project, it was a joke about what and how I toldsaid it.

And he named one women like “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.


And he named one of the women like “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.

And hHe named one of the women like “sheep,-and I felt myself disgusted, i. It was not a correct thing to say.

And he namcalled one women likea “sheep” - I felt myself disgusted, it was not correct.

I want to be independent.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I remembered that “if you wanna go to be angry about words - it means that people can control you” and I don’t like it.


I remembered that “if you wanna go toand be angry about words - it means that people can control you” and I don’idn't like it.

I remembered that “if you wanna go to be angry about words -, it means that people can control you,” and I doidn’t like ithat.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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