Nov. 4, 2025
The reponspisibility of the social media platforms.
Nowadays, people are more and more on their phone. It's definitely due to the social media.
I think it's the reason people spend as time on their screen. But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.
Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.
Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible about those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.
I think the person who posted it is wrong, because he knows that many people can see it and particularly children.
On the other hand, I think the main responsible is the social media platform which allow the person to post it.
It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what he wants even if it could shock certain people.
I think social media platforms have to renforce their control about what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules.
Tell me how you found my english and what is your opinion about that subject!
Nowadays, people are more and more on their phonon their phones more and more.
your version works fine but this flows a little better sounds more natural.
It's definitely due to the social media.
again works with 'the' but more natural without
I think it's the reason people spend aso much time on their screen.
or you could say "spend as much time as they do on their screen"
But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.
Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.
Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible about those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.
I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they knows that many people can see it and, particularly children.
when you don't know gender, just general hypothetical person they is more natural.
On the other hand, I think the main responsibleility is the social media platform which allows the person to post it.
It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what ever they wants even if it could shock certain people.
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Your english is pretty good I understand everything clearly, just small tweeks to make it more natural but overall its really good! I also agree that social media is making people spend too much time on their phones. I think the social media companies need to take more steps to ensure the safety and well beings of their users. Age restrictions and restrictions on hate speech should be much more strict to ensure a safe and fun environment for everyone! But alas the companies make money by getting people addicted to their phone.
yesterday
Thanks a lot for your correction! I am totally agree with your comments!
The responspisibilityies of the social media platforms.
Nowadays, people are on their phone more and more on their phoneften.
It's definitely due to the social media.
I think it's the reason people spend as much time on their screen.
But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.
Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hardposts that are difficult for them.
Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible aboutfor those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.
I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they knows that many people canwill see it and particularly that children will.
On the other hand, I think the main party responsible is the social media platform which allowed the person to post it.
It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what they wants even if it could shock certain people.
I think social media platforms have to reinforce their control aboutover what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules.
Tell me how you found my eEnglish and what is your opinion aboutis on thate subject!
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I think some responsibility needs to be on the parents who give their kids unfiltered access to the internet too. A lot of the platforms react to the burden of keeping content away from kids by just banning that content altogether and that can often restrict people unfairly too. There's a concept in English called the Scunthorpe problem that came from early internet filters. These filters were trying to prevent swearing as it was considered inappropriate for children, but they were too overeager, so they also mangled the name of Scunthorpe (a town in England) to S****thope, which makes it look far more profane than it actually is. Another example was filters that would accidentally turn the word classic into clbuttic.
yesterday
I didn't know that concept, it is interesting. How you found my English?
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I think social media platforms have to renforce their control about what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules. I think social media platforms have to reinforce their control |
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Tell me how you found my english and what is your opinion about that subject! Tell me how you found my |
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It's definitely due to the social medias. |
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But there is another problem with the social medias: the content posted by some people. |
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Indeed, the are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them. |
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I think the person who posted it is wrong, because he know that many people can see it and particularly children. |
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It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allow to publish what he wants even if it could shock certain people. |
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