Nov. 24, 2022
The Relationship Between Three Things
My village is surrounded by a small river and the village looks like a square.
The entrance of the village is in the center of the south side of the village.
A school is in the north of the village. Between the school and the village, there is the river that is mentioned above.
When children in the village want to go to school, they need to get out of the village through the entrance first, then turn left or right and walk for a little while and afterwards walk north along the river to get to the school.
A school is in the north of the village.
If the school is outside the village and to the north of it, "A school is north of the village." would be clearer for the reader.
Between the school and the village, there is the river that iwas mentioned above.
"is mentioned" should be "was mentioned" because "mentioned" is in the past tense.
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Nov. 27, 2022
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The Relationship Between Three Things
My village is surrounded by a small river, and the village looks like a square.
The entrance of the village is in the center of theits south side of the village.
A school is into the north of the village.
Between the school and the village, there is the river that is aforementioned aboriver.
When children in the village want to go to school, they need to get out ofleave the village through the entrance first, then turn left or right and walk for a little while, and afterwards walk north along the river to get to the school.
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My village is surrounded by a small river and the village looks like a square. My village is surrounded by a small river, and the village looks like a square. |
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The entrance of the village is in the center of the south side of the village. The entrance of the village is in the center of |
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A school is in the north of the village. A school is A school is If the school is outside the village and to the north of it, "A school is north of the village." would be clearer for the reader. |
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Between the school and the village, there is the river that is mentioned above. Between the school and the village, there is the Between the school and the village, there is the river that "is mentioned" should be "was mentioned" because "mentioned" is in the past tense. |
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When children in the village want to go to school, they need to get out of the village through the entrance first, then turn left or right and walk for a little while and afterwards walk north along the river to get to the school. When children in the village want to go to school, they need to |
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