June 27, 2022
The relationship between experts and ordinary people
With the development of society, division of science becomes more and more complicated. More and more people have started to rely on experts. This tendency leads to two more obvious problems. One of which is the absence of common sense. Since the existence of experts,ordinary people do not require much effort and time to understand a particular area. The second is the misrepresentation of science. People frequently regard experts as the microphone of science and ignore the attributes of experts, so they may accept the wrong conclusion of extreme science without discrimination.
In daily life, we always need doctors, lawyers, engineers and many other experts. Without them, the world cannot come in. Most of us reckon that experts master more knowledge than us. When our bones are broken, we need to visit doctors. When we travel, we naturally think the pilot knows how to control the train or plan.
However, experts are not always reliable.
Some of whom pay much attention to personal benefits more than facts. A book written by Colin Evans refers to a lot of cases such as Kennedy's assassination. The reason why these cases are controversial is that humanity. As long as there is the existence of humanity, there will be benefits, vanity, weakness etc. Science might be affected by these experts who are reluctant to acknowledge their mistakes. Dctors might give you some useless medicine in order to earn more money. The media and writers are more likely to produce a set of rumours to sell their books or magazines.
And some focus too much on theory and lack practical experience. Like these doctors in the text we have just learnt, even when they are diagnosing their patients, the theoretical research still remain in their minds. Eventually they fail to give the treatment they have promised. In daily life, tragedies caused by doctors who make judgements according to their limited expertise instead of specific conditions are not unusual.
Ordinary people get to know a little about professional knowledge, which results in false experts emerging in endlessly to give them some "professional advice". People always rely on the expert and are unable to distinguish true and false experts.Moreover,they often fall into traps. Many people pay for the painful price of tears, property and even life.
Our reliance on experts is appropriate to see experts as a reference rather than a manipulator. Before asking experts to suggest, we must collect relative information online to increase our common sense.We learn to improve our ability to identify,think rationally and ask the experienced people around us for suggestions, preventing ourselves from being cheated.
With the development of society, the division of science becomes more and more complicated.
More and more people have started to rely on experts.
This tendency leads to two more obvious problems.
'More' is a bit redundant because you did not explicitly state a problem before this sentence.
One of which is the absence of common sense.
Since the existence of experts, ordinary people do not require much effort and time to understand a particular area.
The second is the misrepresentation of science.
People frequently regard experts as the microphone of science and ignore the attributes of experts, so. As such, they may accept the wrong conclusion of extreme science without discrimination.
Lengthy sentences often confuse the reader.
In daily life, we always need doctors, lawyers, engineers, and many other experts.
Although it is technically correct, 'always' is redundant because you already said the term for time - daily. Also, don't forget the Oxford comma!
Without them, the world cannot come inprosper.
Come in where? Where would they go to? I think you mean develop or prosper.
Most of us reckon that experts master more knowledge than us.
When our bones are broken, we need to visit doctors.
When we travel, we naturally think the pilot knows how to control the train or plane.
Pilots fly airplanes. A train conductor manages a train.
However, experts are not always reliable.
Some of whom pay much attention to personal benefits more than facts.
A book written by Colin Evans refers to a lot of cases such as Kennedy's assassination.
The reason why these cases are controversial is thatdue to the subject of humanity.
As long as there is the existence of humanity exists, there will be benefits, vanity, weakness, etc.
Science might be affected by these experts who are reluctant to acknowledge their mistakes.
Doctors might give you some uselessnnecessary medicine in order to earn more money.
The media and writers are more likely to produce a set of rumours to sell their books or magazines.
Are you writing in British English or American English? British English would often spell some words with 'ou' such as in rumour, while American English would drop the 'u' like in rumor.
And some focus too much on theory and lack practical experience.
LikeFor example, these doctors in the text we have just learnted, even when they are diagnosing their patients, the theoretical research still remains in their minds.
Eventually, they fail to give the treatment they have promised.
In daily life, tragedies caused by doctors who make judgements according to their limited expertise instead of specific conditions are not unusual.
Although it is technically correct, the spelling of judgment is much preferred in both American and British English.
Ordinary people get to know a little about professional knowledge, which resultsing in false experts emerging in endlessly to give them some "professional advice"."
People always rely on the so-called "experts" and are unable to distinguish true and false experts. Moreover, they often fall into traps.
Many people pay for the painful price of tears, property, and even life.
I just added an Oxford comma. You can search what it is online.
Our reliance on experts is appropriate toshould be to moderately see experts as a reference rather than as a manipulator.
I don't get what you mean by this sentence so I rephrased it.
Before asking experts to' suggestions, we must collect relative information online to increase our common sense. We must learn to improve our ability to identify, think rationally and ask the experienced people around us for suggestions, preventing ourselves from being cheated.
Feedback
Your text is very in-depth. You have a way with words. Although, I must say that you have to check the credibility of online information before suggesting that people do their own research. There is a lot of false information online. Anyway, kudos to you! :>
July 19, 2022
Without them, the world cannot come inprosper.
Actually, I use the meaning of" come in " which is similar to "work"
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The relationship between experts and ordinary people |
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With the development of society, division of science becomes more and more complicated. With the development of society, the division of science becomes more and more complicated. |
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More and more people have started to rely on experts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This tendency leads to two more obvious problems. This tendency leads to two 'More' is a bit redundant because you did not explicitly state a problem before this sentence. |
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One of which is the absence of common sense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since the existence of experts,ordinary people do not require much effort and time to understand a particular area. Since the existence of experts, ordinary people do not require much effort and time to understand a particular area. |
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The second is the misrepresentation of science. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People frequently regard experts as the microphone of science and ignore the attributes of experts, so they may accept the wrong conclusion of extreme science without discrimination. People frequently regard experts as the microphone of science and ignore the attributes of experts Lengthy sentences often confuse the reader. |
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In daily life, we always need doctors, lawyers, engineers and many other experts. In daily life, we Although it is technically correct, 'always' is redundant because you already said the term for time - daily. Also, don't forget the Oxford comma! |
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Without them, the world cannot come in. Without them, the world cannot Come in where? Where would they go to? I think you mean develop or prosper. |
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Most of us reckon that experts master more knowledge than us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When our bones are broken, we need to visit doctors. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When we travel, we naturally think the pilot knows how to control the train or plan. When we travel, we naturally think the pilot knows how to control the Pilots fly airplanes. A train conductor manages a train. |
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However, experts are not always reliable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of whom pay much attention to personal benefits more than facts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A book written by Colin Evans refers to a lot of cases such as Kennedy's assassination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reason why these cases are controversial is that humanity. The reason why these cases are controversial is |
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As long as there is the existence of humanity, there will be benefits, vanity, weakness etc. As long as |
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Science might be affected by these experts who are reluctant to acknowledge their mistakes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Dctors might give you some useless medicine in order to earn more money. Doctors might give you some u |
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The media and writers are more likely to produce a set of rumours to sell their books or magazines. The media and writers are more likely to produce a set of rumours to sell their books or magazines. Are you writing in British English or American English? British English would often spell some words with 'ou' such as in rumour, while American English would drop the 'u' like in rumor. |
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And some focus too much on theory and lack practical experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like these doctors in the text we have just learnt, even when they are diagnosing their patients, the theoretical research still remain in their minds.
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Eventually they fail to give the treatment they have promised. Eventually, they fail to give the treatment they have promised. |
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In daily life, tragedies caused by doctors who make judgements according to their limited expertise instead of specific conditions are not unusual. In daily life, tragedies caused by doctors who make judgements according to their limited expertise instead of specific conditions are not unusual. Although it is technically correct, the spelling of judgment is much preferred in both American and British English. |
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Ordinary people get to know a little about professional knowledge, which results in false experts emerging in endlessly to give them some "professional advice". Ordinary people get to know a little about professional knowledge |
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People always rely on the expert and are unable to distinguish true and false experts.Moreover,they often fall into traps. People always rely on the so-called "experts" and are unable to distinguish true and false experts. Moreover, they often fall into traps. |
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Many people pay for the painful price of tears, property and even life. Many people pay for the painful price of tears, property, and even life. I just added an Oxford comma. You can search what it is online. |
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Our reliance on experts is appropriate to see experts as a reference rather than a manipulator. Our reliance on experts I don't get what you mean by this sentence so I rephrased it. |
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Before asking experts to suggest, we must collect relative information online to increase our common sense.We learn to improve our ability to identify,think rationally and ask the experienced people around us for suggestions, preventing ourselves from being cheated. Before asking experts |
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