Jan. 5, 2026
The rediscovery of Yoko Tsuno!
This afternoon, I re-read the first volume of the comic series Yoko Tsuno, one of my favourite comic series from childhood!
I was about ten years old when I first discovered these fantastic science fiction comics.
A few weeks ago, I bought a new bookcase for my living room. While unpacking my moving boxes, I came across a few of my old Yoko Tsuno comics.
I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction.
So last weekend I gave in and browsed a second-hand website, and I ordered fourteen of them to complete my Yoko Tsuno collection.
On to volume two!
I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction.,
Sso last weekend I gave in and browsed a second-hand website, and I ordered fourteen of them to complete my Yoko Tsuno collection.
Starting a sentence with "so" in this context feels a bit strange to me. Alternatively, the sentences could stay separate and instead have the "so" removed, but this way works better.
The rediscovery of Yoko Tsuno!
This afternoon, I re-read the first volume of the comic series Yoko Tsuno, one of my favourite comic series from childhood!
I was about ten years old when I first discovered these fantastic science fiction comics.
A few weeks ago, I bought a new bookcase for my living room.
While unpacking my moving boxes, I came across a few of my old Yoko Tsuno comics.
I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction.
So last weekend I gave in and browsedwent on a second-hand website, and I ordered fourteen of them to complete my Yoko Tsuno collection.
Everything here besides the correction of "browsed" is just minor nitpicks to make it seem a little bit more natural, even though everything was already grammatically correct
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This is really well-written. Good job
Jan. 6, 2026
Thanks!
Avoiding repetition, my burden :-)
The rediscovery of Yoko Tsuno!
This afternoon, I re-read the first volume of the comic series Yoko Tsuno, one of my favourite comic series from childhood!
I was about ten years old when I first discovered these fantastic science fiction comics.
A few weeks ago, I bought a new bookcase for my living room.
While unpacking my moving boxes, I came across a few of my old Yoko Tsuno comics.
I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction.
So last weekend I gave in and browsedlooked for some on a second-hand website, and I ordered fourteen of them to complete my Yoko Tsuno collection.
I wouldn't say it's wrong, but "browsing," both in online and offline contexts, generally implies you're just casually looking around, but not for anything specific. Since in this case it seems like you're specifically hunting down Yoko Tsuno comics, I proposed an alternative.
On to volume two!
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Great job!
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This afternoon, I re-read the first volume of the comic series Yoko Tsuno, one of my favourite comic series from childhood! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was about ten years old when I first discovered these fantastic science fiction comics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few weeks ago, I bought a new bookcase for my living room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While unpacking my moving boxes, I came across a few of my old Yoko Tsuno comics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I suddenly felt nostalgic, as they brought back happy memories of a time when I was a young boy discovering science fiction |
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So last weekend I gave in and browsed a second-hand website, and I ordered fourteen of them to complete my Yoko Tsuno collection. So last weekend I gave in and I wouldn't say it's wrong, but "browsing," both in online and offline contexts, generally implies you're just casually looking around, but not for anything specific. Since in this case it seems like you're specifically hunting down Yoko Tsuno comics, I proposed an alternative. So last weekend I gave in and Everything here besides the correction of "browsed" is just minor nitpicks to make it seem a little bit more natural, even though everything was already grammatically correct
Starting a sentence with "so" in this context feels a bit strange to me. Alternatively, the sentences could stay separate and instead have the "so" removed, but this way works better. |
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On to volume two! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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