July 21, 2020
The Recycling Chart
This line chart illustrates the percentage rate of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics in the recycling process of a country between 1928 and 2010.
Overall, the rate of all four-material raised from the beginning of research. Paper and cardboard held its position as the most recycled material, while plastics remaining the less recycled.
The recycling of paper and cardboard fluctuated till the beginning of the 1990, when it has a sharp rise to 80 percent in 1994, with a steady decrease to 70 percent by 2010. The recycling of glass containers reduced from 50 percent to 40 in 1990, with returning to its starting amount in 1994 continued with a gradual increase in every year, reaching 60 percent by 2010. Aluminum cans climb down from 5 percent in the year of 1986 up to approximately 45 percent in 2010, showing the most significant rise among all the materials. Lastly, the plastics remained almost on the same rate below 10 percent during the whole period.
The Recycling Chart
This line chart illustrates the percentage rate of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics in the recycling process of a country between 1928 and 2010.
Overall, the recycling rate of all four-materials has raised from the beginning of research.
Paper and cardboard held its position as the most recycled material, while plastics remaininged the lessast recycled.
Verb tenses should match (held & remained)
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The recycling of glass containers reduced from 50 percent to 40 in 1990, withand then returning to its starting amountoriginal 50% rate in 1994 which continued with ato gradually increase in every year, until reaching 60 percent byin 2010.
Aluminum cans climb downrecycling actually increased from 5 percent in the year of 1986 up to approximately 45 percent in 2010, showing the most significant rise among all the materials.
Lastly, the recycling of plastics remained almost on the same rate below, less than 10 percent, during the whole period.¶
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This line chart illustrates the percentage rate of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics in the recycling process of a country between 1928 and 2010. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Overall, the rate of all four-material raised from the beginning of research. Overall, the recycling rate of all four-materials has raised from the beginning of research. |
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Paper and cardboard held its position as the most recycled material, while plastics remaining the less recycled. Paper and cardboard held its position as the most recycled material Verb tenses should match (held & remained) |
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The recycling of paper and cardboard fluctuated till the beginning of the 1990, when it has a sharp rise to 80 percent in 1994, with a steady decrease to 70 percent by 2010.
A transition is helpful here because you are stating an interesting/surprising idea. |
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The recycling of glass containers reduced from 50 percent to 40 in 1990, with returning to its starting amount in 1994 continued with a gradual increase in every year, reaching 60 percent by 2010. The recycling of glass containers reduced from 50 percent to 40 in 1990, |
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Aluminum cans climb down from 5 percent in the year of 1986 up to approximately 45 percent in 2010, showing the most significant rise among all the materials. Aluminum cans |
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Lastly, the plastics remained almost on the same rate below 10 percent during the whole period. Lastly, the recycling of plastics remained almost on the same rate |
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