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paula9099

Aug. 18, 2025

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The real advantage of teleportation

I would love to have the power of teleportation. I love travelling but is something expensive and, depend on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less. I have always dreamt with having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.
But the really important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to a party and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´t need to wait for the subway! you go directly home yo your bed! It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.

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The real advantage of teleportation

I would love to have the power of teleportation.

I love travelling, but is something expensive and, depending on the place where do you want to go, you will needonly get to stay mfore a few days or less.for a long time.

I have always dreamt withabout having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work the next day without jet lag.

But the reallymost important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to ago partying and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´'t need to wait for the subway!

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you go directly home yoIn fact, you can go straight your bed at home!

It`s totally's the best superpower that I can imagine.

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paula9099

Aug. 20, 2025

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Thank you

The rReal aAdvantage of tTeleportation

I would love to have the power of teleportation.

I love travelling, but it is something expensive and, d. Depending on the place where dothat you want to go, you will need to stay more days or lesfewer days.

I have always dreamt withed of having a coffee in Rome on Monday,. On Tuesday, I would want to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or. Maybe, I would be enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday, and go back to work next day without jet lag.

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yYou go directly home yto your bed!

It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.

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Great job on writing this text.

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paula9099

Aug. 18, 2025

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Thank you!! :)

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marblemenow

Aug. 18, 2025

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You're welcome.

The real advantage of teleportation

I would love to have the power of teleportation.

I love to travelling but is somethingt is expensive, and, depending on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less.

I love to travel but it is expensive, and depending on where you want to go, you will need to stay for more or less days.

I have always dreamt withof having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.

But the really important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to a party and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´t need to wait for the subway!

yYou go directly home yto your bed!

It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.

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Great job overall. Teleportation would be an amazing power to have!

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paula9099

Aug. 18, 2025

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Thank you so much!! :)

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I would love to have the power of teleportation.


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I love travelling but is something expensive and, depend on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less.


I love to travelling but is somethingt is expensive, and, depending on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less.

I love to travel but it is expensive, and depending on where you want to go, you will need to stay for more or less days.

I love travelling, but it is something expensive and, d. Depending on the place where dothat you want to go, you will need to stay more days or lesfewer days.

I love travelling, but is something expensive and, depending on the place where do you want to go, you will needonly get to stay mfore a few days or less.for a long time.

I have always dreamt with having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.


I have always dreamt withof having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.

I have always dreamt withed of having a coffee in Rome on Monday,. On Tuesday, I would want to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or. Maybe, I would be enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday, and go back to work next day without jet lag.

I have always dreamt withabout having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work the next day without jet lag.

But the really important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to a party and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´t need to wait for the subway!


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But the reallyThe most important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks, or you go to a party and i. It gets really late, w. With the power of teleportation, you don´'t need to wait for the subway!

But the reallymost important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to ago partying and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´'t need to wait for the subway!

' <-- use this, change your keyboard

you go directly home yo your bed!


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you go directly home yoIn fact, you can go straight your bed at home!

It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.


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It`s totally's the best superpower that I can imagine.

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