Aug. 23, 2020
The reading reflection of Pro colonist
Looking back at history, those that have a lot of invisible lines divide people into many categories. Color, religion, gender, belief could be the tips for classifying people. In the historial bigger pictures, we could learn how humans classifying different people slip into two parts. In the book and combined with my reflection, its subsequent history can be divided into three eras to show the two main categories are changing. Having benefited from the industrial revolution, the West had a prosperous period. During that time, people classified people as West or no-west world as rich or poor. The triumph of the civil war had churned the main two categorical again. A new concept was built as White or Black. Since Donal Trump won the presidential seat, the immigration issues had been pushed on the blink of the social edge. People are tagged by immigrants or citizens. My point is there are always having deep chasm between people. The changes in the world always silently classify people by themselves. No one could avoid the fate of “sealed into that crushing objecthood”.
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The reading reflection of Pa pro -colonialist
I think colonialist is probably the word you are looking for here, it gives a bit more of a political/imperialist tone.
Generally after pro we add a hyphen. For example: pro-war, pro-peace...
Looking back at history, those that havere are a lot of invisible lines which/that divide people into many categories.
I'm not positive that I have understood what you are trying to say here
Color, religion, gender, belief could be the tipmethods for classifying people.
In the historical bigger pictures, we could learn how humans classifying different people slipbreak into two parts.
In the book and combined with my reflection, its subsequent history can be divided into three eras to show how the two main categories are changing.
Having benefited from the industrial revolution, the West had a prosperous period.
During that time, people classified people as Westin the western or non-western world as rich or poor.
The triumph of the civil war had churned the main two categoricales again.
churned is an unusual word choice here
A new concept was built ascreated of White or Black.
It's not correct or incorrect, but some people don't capitalize white/black here, and some do.
Since Donal d Trump won the presidential seat, the immigration issues hadve been pushed ton the blrink of the social edgeconflict.
People are tagged byas immigrants or citizens.
My point is there arehas always havingbeen deep chasms between people.
The changes in the world always silently classify people by themselveinto groups.
No one could avoid the fate of being “sealed into that crushing objecthood”.
The use of this quotation vreates a sentence that is hard to follow.
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Nice job. This is a complicated topic!
Aug. 24, 2020
Thank your corrections and comment :D
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The reading reflection of Pro colonist The reading reflection of I think colonialist is probably the word you are looking for here, it gives a bit more of a political/imperialist tone. Generally after pro we add a hyphen. For example: pro-war, pro-peace... |
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Looking back at history, those that have a lot of invisible lines divide people into many categories. Looking back at history, th I'm not positive that I have understood what you are trying to say here |
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Color, religion, gender, belief could be the tips for classifying people. Color, religion, gender, belief could be the |
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In the historial bigger pictures, we could learn how humans classifying different people slip into two parts. In the historical bigger picture |
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In the book and combined with my reflection, its subsequent history can be divided into three eras to show the two main categories are changing. In the book and combined with my reflection, its subsequent history can be divided into three eras to show how the two main categories are changing. |
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Having benefited from the industrial revolution, the West had a prosperous period. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During that time, people classified people as West or no-west world as rich or poor. During that time, people classified people |
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The triumph of the civil war had churned the main two categorical again. The triumph of the civil war had churned the main two categori churned is an unusual word choice here |
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A new concept was built as White or Black. A new concept was It's not correct or incorrect, but some people don't capitalize white/black here, and some do. |
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Since Donal Trump won the presidential seat, the immigration issues had been pushed on the blink of the social edge. Since Donal |
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People are tagged by immigrants or citizens. People are tagged |
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My point is there are always having deep chasm between people. My point is there |
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The changes in the world always silently classify people by themselves. The changes in the world always silently classify people |
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No one could avoid the fate of “sealed into that crushing objecthood”. No one could avoid the fate of being “sealed into that crushing objecthood”. The use of this quotation vreates a sentence that is hard to follow. |
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