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Jan. 7, 2021

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The Queen's Gambit

I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and looked for another one in Netflix.
I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game "chess". Chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is called as Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.
Genius people are always depicted as lunatic people in the movies, and this story is no exception. the protagonist suffers from alcoholic and drug addiction. I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes obstacles such as unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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I geot bored with "Stranger Things"," which is a Netflix original show, andso I looked for another one ion Netflix.

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

CPlaying chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is called asthan shogi, the Japanese chess, so. Thus, I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic peoples in the movies, and this story is no exception.

tThe protagonist suffers from an alcoholic and drug addiction.

I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes her obstacles such as an unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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"The Queen's Gambit" is a super fun watch. Hope you enjoy it, and I think your writing is great! Good job! :)

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tommy

Jan. 9, 2021

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I'm glad to know that "The Queen's Gambit" gained a good reputation. Thank you for your feedbacks.

I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and thus started lookeding for another one ion Netflix.

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

ChessIt is easier to grasp how to play chess than shogi, which is calledso known as Japanese chess, so. Thus, I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic peoples in the movies, and this story is no exception.

tThe protagonist suffers from an alcoholic and drug addiction.

I'm looking forward to seeing how she overcomes obstacles such as an unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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tommy

Jan. 9, 2021

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Thank you for correcting me.

I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and looked for another one ion Netflix.

"In" isn't too bad, but "on Netflix" is more common. (Think "on TV").

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

Chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is sometimes called as Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Alternatively, "It is easier to grasp how to play chess than how to play shogi".

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic people in the moviess in media, and this story is no exception.

Here, since "The Queen's Gambit" is a show, I think "in media" is a bit more natural than "in the movies".

You can pretty much treat the preference for "geniuses" over "genius people" and "lunatics" over "lunatic people" as being arbitrary; I can't think of any particular reason why one "geniuses" is preferred, but it sounds a bit weird if you say "genius people".

tThe protagonist suffers from alcoholicsm and a drug addiction.

I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes obstacles such as her unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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tommy

Jan. 9, 2021

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Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic people in the moviess in media, and this story is no exception.

Thank you for your comment! I'm careful not to add "people".

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aleng

Jan. 9, 2021

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Thank you for your comment! I'm careful not to add "people".

Be careful that this is pretty specific to just "geniuses" and "lunatics" (and a few other words). I think that most of the time, you still use "people".

The Queen's Gambit

I geot bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, andso I looked for another onsomething else ion Netflix.

I found "The Queen's Gambit", which is interesting since the plot is about my favorite game: "chess".

ChessIt is easier to grasp how to play chess than shogi, which is called asor Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic people in theeccentric in movies, and this story is no exception.

tThe protagonist suffers from alcoholic and drug addiction.

I'm looking forward to seeing how she overcomes obstacles such as her unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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tommy

Jan. 9, 2021

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Thank you for correcting me.

The Queen's Gambit


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I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and looked for another one in Netflix.


I geot bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, andso I looked for another onsomething else ion Netflix.

I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and looked for another one ion Netflix.

"In" isn't too bad, but "on Netflix" is more common. (Think "on TV").

I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and thus started lookeding for another one ion Netflix.

I geot bored with "Stranger Things"," which is a Netflix original show, andso I looked for another one ion Netflix.

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game "chess".


I found "The Queen's Gambit", which is interesting since the plot is about my favorite game: "chess".

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game, "chess".

Chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is called as Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.


ChessIt is easier to grasp how to play chess than shogi, which is called asor Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is sometimes called as Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Alternatively, "It is easier to grasp how to play chess than how to play shogi".

ChessIt is easier to grasp how to play chess than shogi, which is calledso known as Japanese chess, so. Thus, I learned to play chess online against the computer.

CPlaying chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is called asthan shogi, the Japanese chess, so. Thus, I learned to play chess online against the computer.

Genius people are always depicted as lunatic people in the movies, and this story is no exception.


Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic people in theeccentric in movies, and this story is no exception.

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic people in the moviess in media, and this story is no exception.

Here, since "The Queen's Gambit" is a show, I think "in media" is a bit more natural than "in the movies". You can pretty much treat the preference for "geniuses" over "genius people" and "lunatics" over "lunatic people" as being arbitrary; I can't think of any particular reason why one "geniuses" is preferred, but it sounds a bit weird if you say "genius people".

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic peoples in the movies, and this story is no exception.

Genius peoples are always depicted as lunatic peoples in the movies, and this story is no exception.

the protagonist suffers from alcoholic and drug addiction.


tThe protagonist suffers from alcoholic and drug addiction.

tThe protagonist suffers from alcoholicsm and a drug addiction.

tThe protagonist suffers from an alcoholic and drug addiction.

tThe protagonist suffers from an alcoholic and drug addiction.

I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes obstacles such as unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.


I'm looking forward to seeing how she overcomes obstacles such as her unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes obstacles such as her unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

I'm looking forward to seeing how she overcomes obstacles such as an unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes her obstacles such as an unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.

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