EveryAll things and more can now be done right from our sofas. All this and more can now be done right from our sofas.

What is it, that “what you like”, objectively? What is it, that “what you like”, objectively?

What is that “what you like” objectively? What is “what you like” objectively?

What is thatObjectively, what is “what you like” objectively? Objectively, what is “what you like”?

Have you ever thought about your privileges as a person living nowathese days? Have you ever thought about your privileges as a person living these days?

Have you ever thought about your privileges as a person living nowadayin these times? Have you ever thought about your privileges as a person living in these times?

I mean, just think about thait. I mean, just think about it.

I mean, just think about thait. I mean, just think about it.

"just think about that" is perfectly fine but "just think about it" is like a fixed expression

I mean, just think about that.

The original sentence is very casual and causes a bit of a tonal shift in your language so I deleted it for consistency's sake. If you're going to use words like "whilst" and "indeed," you should try to keep the tone formal.

We can get on a plane and move to any spot on the planet in no time, whilste watching a premiere blockbuster in a comfortable chair. We can get on a plane and move to any spot on the planet in no time, while watching a premiere blockbuster in a comfortable chair.

"whilst" is very old-fashioned, avoid it

Book a dentist or reserve a table in a restaurant?! Book a dentist or reserve a table in a restaurant!

Book aWould you like to book an appointment with the dentist or, reserve a table in a restaurant, order takeout or choose a new pair of jeans? Would you like to book an appointment with the dentist, reserve a table in a restaurant, order takeout or choose a new pair of jeans?

Order a takeaway or choose a new pair of jeans?! Order a takeaway or choose a new pair of jeans!

Order a takeaway or choose a new pair of jeans?

I feel as if the writing here is very inconsistent so, for expediency's sake, I'm going to correct the rest without comments.

Isn’t that great?

The problem is, the Internet and other technologies have not only provided us with comfort and convenience, but with inevitable problems. The problem is, the Internet and other technologies have not only provided us with comfort and convenience, but with inevitable problems.

The problem is, the Internet and other technologies have not only provided us with comfort and convenience but with inevitable problemsproblems such as inequality, unrealistic standards of beauty, FOMO syndrome and depression, etc ... The problem is, the Internet and other technologies have not only provided us with comfort and convenience but with problems such as inequality, unrealistic standards of beauty, FOMO syndrome and depression, etc ...

Inequality and unrealistic standards of beauty, FOMO syndrome and depression, the list goes on.

Even though today we can comego to a supermarket and choose betweenwith hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose just because there are just too many of them. Even though today we can go to a supermarket with hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose because there are just too many of them.

Even though today we can comego to a supermarket and choose between hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose just because there are just too many of them. Even though today we can go to a supermarket and choose between hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose just because there are just too many of them.

Even though today we can comego to a supermarket and choose between hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose just because there are just too many of themchoices. Even though today we can go to a supermarket and choose between hundreds of brands, often we can’t choose because there are just too many choices.

I bet our ancestors couldn’t imagine such a thing as the inability to choose"paradox of choice" in their tough and adventurous life. I bet our ancestors couldn’t imagine such a thing as the "paradox of choice" in their tough and adventurous life.

This 'inability to choose' because there is too much to choose from is called the "paradox of choice". It helps to use this phrase here, to make clear the 'inability to chose

I bet our ancestors couldn’t imagine such a thing as the inability to choosebeing overwhelmed by choices back in their tough and adventurous lifeves. I bet our ancestors couldn’t imagine such a thing as being overwhelmed by choices back in their tough and adventurous lives.

"inability" doesn't quite work here -- we're *able* to choose, it's just *hard* to do

I bet oOur ancestors probably couldn’t imagine such a thing as the inability to choose in their tougharsh and adventurperilous lifeves. Our ancestors probably couldn’t imagine such a thing as the inability to choose in their harsh and perilous lives.

Indeed, while you run from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (if athe tiger won’doesn't eat you first), there’s not much time at all to complain about anythings. Indeed, while you run from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (if the tiger doesn't eat you first), there’s not much time to complain about things.

Indeed, whilen you're running from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (if aassuming the tiger wodoesn’t eat you), there’s not much time at all to complain about anything. Indeed, when you're running from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (assuming the tiger doesn’t eat you), there’s not much time at all to complain about anything.

match running -> thinking

Indeed, while you runif you are running from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (if athe tiger won’t eat you), there’s not much time at all to complain about anything else. Indeed, if you are running from a tiger, thinking about what you are supposed to eat today (if the tiger won’t eat you), there’s not much time at all to complain about anything else.

Even if they had time to complain, they wouldn’t have been ranting about abundant choices —but, rather, about the lack of food. Even if they had time to complain, they wouldn’t have been ranting about abundant choices but, rather, about the lack of food.

It would sound funny if it waseren’t so sad. It would sound funny if it weren’t so sad.

There's an old grammar rule some people follow -- after "if" use "weren't" instead of "wasn't" when speaking hypothetically. (Concrete) If he isn't rich, he must not be important. (Hypothetical) If he weren't so rich, he wouldn't be so important.

That is to say, while on the one side of the planet people are starving from hunger or only making ends meeruggling to find enough food to eat, someone on the other side is strugglesing because they can’t choose something in their lifewhat to eat. That is to say, while on the one side of the planet people are struggling to find enough food to eat, someone on the other side is struggling because they can’t choose what to eat.

The original sentence _works_, but I think this correction is closer to what you wanted to do. Creating a strong contrast by having "struggling" reflected in both sentences.

That is to say, while on the one side of the planet people are starving from hunger or only making ends meet, someone on the other side struggles because they can’t choose something in their daily life. That is to say, while on one side of the planet people are starving from hunger or only making ends meet, someone on the other side struggles because they can’t choose something in their daily life.

For poor or disadvantaged people, it may sound not only ridiculous, but insulting. For poor or disadvantaged people, it may sound not only ridiculous, but insulting.

MeanwhileBut, it is the reality of what’s going on today in the world. But, it is the reality of the world.

"meanwhile" makes things sound unrelated; "but" sets up a contrast.

The problem of choice occurs when there’s an excess of resources, and by that, I meanit's not only t-shirts, letters, toys, and stuffed animals, but anything. The problem of choice occurs when there’s an excess of resources, and by that, it's not only t-shirts, letters, toys, and stuffed animals, but anything.

Eventually, we are no longer able to choose n. Not only abetween careers or a place ofs to livinge, but even friends and partners. Eventually, we are no longer able to choose. Not only between careers or places to live, but even friends and partners.

Eventually, we are no longer able to choose not only a career or a place tof livinge but even friends and partners. Eventually, we are no longer able to choose not only a career or a place to live but even friends and partners.

Eventually, we are no longer able to choose not only a career or a place tof livinge but even friends and partners. Eventually, we are no longer able to choose not only a career or a place to live but even friends and partners.

With the prevalence of the Internet, we gotpossess unlimited access to online dating apps and porn sites, resulting in a tremendous amount of possible partners. With the prevalence of the Internet, we possess unlimited access to online dating apps and porn sites, resulting in a tremendous amount of possible partners.

In comparison withUnlike our parents, we can’t anymore just meet someone on a street, or at a party, huang out for a while, and then get married, because we won’t be satisfied with just that. Unlike our parents, we can’t just meet someone on a street, or at a party, hang out for a while and then get married, because we won’t be satisfied with just that.

In comparison withntrast to our parents, we can’t anymore no longer just meet someone on a street or at a party, huang out for a while, and get married, because we won’t be satisfied with that. In contrast to our parents, we can no longer just meet someone on a street or at a party, hang out for a while, and get married, because we won’t be satisfied with that.

"can't anymore just" - for some reason this doesn't work, I'm not sure why

In comparison with our parents, we can’t anymore just meet someone on a street or at a party, huang out for a while, and get married any more, because we won’t be satisfied with that. In comparison with our parents, we can’t just meet someone on a street or at a party, hang out for awhile, and get married any more, because we won’t be satisfied with that.

NumerousThe innumerable amounts of possible paramours just dwon’'t let us take a break from swiping online. The innumerable amount of possible paramours won't let us take a break from swiping online.

Numerous amounts of possible paramours just don’t let us take a break from swiping online. Numerous amounts of possible paramours don’t let us take a break from swiping online.

You're overusing the word "just."

Even if, for a while, we stick to one partner, this endless online black hole is too appealing, mesmerizing us with promising perspectives and even more affectionate lovers. Even if, for a while, we stick to one partner, this endless online black hole is too appealing, mesmerizing us with promising perspectives and even more affectionate lovers.

Noneevertheless, why should we limit ourselves, especially when so many people get tricked into the consumeristic Samsara wheel? Nevertheless, why should we limit ourselves, especially when so many people get tricked into the consumeristic Samsara wheel?

First, you get an unlimited choice of items, whether it’s fashionable dresses or brand- new televisions. First, you get an unlimited choice of items, whether it’s fashionable dresses or brand new televisions.

Then you choose something and buy it, only to think shortly thereafter that this thing isn’t good enough for you. Then you choose something and buy it, only to think shortly thereafter that this thing isn’t good enough for you.

Wait, butBut wait, why do you think like that? But wait, why do you think like that?

Wait, but why do you think like that? Wait, but why do you think that?

Wait, but why do you think like that? Why do you think like that?

Well, only bBecause you caught sight of other items in the shop — more expensive, more “cool” or just more flashy. Because you caught sight of other items in the shop — more expensive, more “cool” or just more flashy.

Well, only because you caught sight of other items in the shop — more expensive, “cooler” or just more flashyflashier items. Well, only because you caught sight of other items in the shop — more expensive, “cooler” or just flashier items.

Well, onIt's probably because you caught sight of other items in the shop —which are more expensive, “cool” or just more flashyier. It's probably because you caught sight of other items in the shop which are more expensive, “cool” or just flashier.

Well, what should we do with theis modern curse of choice? Well, what should we do with this modern curse of choice?

Well, what should we do with the modern curse of choice? What should we do with the modern curse of choice?

We both know that you would only depart tofor the forest if only there wereas at least WIFI, an ATM, and a decent hotel. We both know that you would only depart for the forest if there was at least WIFI, an ATM, and a decent hotel.

We both know that youYou probably would depart to the forest if only if there were at least WIFI, an ATM, and a decent hotel. You probably would depart to the forest only if there were at least WIFI, an ATM, and a decent hotel.

What I would suggest is somethingthe opposite — stay where you are. What I would suggest is the opposite — stay where you are.

What I would suggest is somethingthe opposite — stay where you are. What I would suggest is the opposite — stay where you are.

Just whenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about thatis: how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like? Just whenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about this: how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like?

Just whenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about that: how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like? Just whenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like?

Just wWhenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about that: how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like? Whenever you swipe on Amazon or Tinder, think about that: how many hundreds of swipes will it take to find what you like?

What if you never find it here? What if you never find it?

Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but big brands who are swiping you, like pawns? Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but big brands who are swiping you, like pawns?

Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but big brands who are swiping you, like a pawns? Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but big brands who are swiping you, like a pawn?

not you who -> but big brands who

Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but it's the big brands who are swiping you, like pawns? Is it possible that it’s not you who’s swiping, choosing people or goods, but it's the big brands who are swiping you, like pawns?

TSo think about that, next time you again would befind yourself unable to choose, a. And maybe, thatis time and, with that knowledge, you wouldn’t liken't get on that treadmill of choosing that much. So think about that, next time you find yourself unable to choose. And maybe, this time, with that knowledge, you won't get on that treadmill of choosing.

Think about that the next time you are again would be unable to choose, and maybe that time and with that knowledge you wouldn’t like thate treadmill of choosing thatso much. Think about that the next time you are again unable to choose, and maybe with that knowledge you won’t like the treadmill of choosing so much.

Think about that the next time you again would bare unable to choose, and maybe that time and with thatis knowledge you wouldn’t liken't jump on thate treadmill of choosing thatfrom so much. Think about that the next time you again are unable to choose and maybe that time with this knowledge you won't jump on the treadmill of choosing from so much.