The pPrincess Of Fragrant Herbs

— It happens, — the old woman tolsaid.

I think "told" is generally combined with someone being told something, e.g. "told her".

In rich and nobele families the children are pampered, and a little something -when they finally face a little problem they get sick.

The second half of your sentence doesn't make sense at the moment. This is what I would say.

Even though, your girl is small you should pamper her less.

Instead of 'pamper' you could also say 'spoil'.

— TWhat's right you speak you say is true, — agreed Fengjie.

or 'You speak the truth'

Concoct thea name for her for happines.

This is poetic and dated, which I guess is what the original text is.

Let her lives to the same ages like as you!

Or 'Let her live to a great age like you!'

Although, the village people suffer hardships, they live for a long time.

If thea poor man give the name tos my doaughter, it will banish evil spirits!

OThe old woman thought and then asked with a smile: — Let me know, what a day was your girl was born?

— That's the point, she was born ion an unlucky day, — answered Fengjie, — the seventh day of the seventh month.

— Do you know the proverb: "Just fighting fire with fire"?

I think I'd say 'Fight fire with fire', but what you've written is correct.

— It happens, — the old woman told.

You just need to add 'the'.

Even though, your girl is small, you should pamper her less.

Misplacement of the coma.

Let her lives the same ages like you!

No need for the plural.

If the poor man gives the name to my doaughter, it will banish evil spirits!

Misspelling of the word daughter.

OThe old woman thought and then asked with a smile: — Let me know, what a day was your girl was born?

— That's the point, she was born ion an unlucky day, — answered Fengjie, — the seventh day of the seventh month.