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rainbowchen

Jan. 30, 2023

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The present from my sister

yesterday, when i were home, I received a perfume sachet from my sister-in-law. It means I will meet my MR in the next year

I am looking forward to meeting the man

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It means I will meet my MR in the next year.

I am looking forward to meeting the man.

The present from my sister

yYesterday, when iI wereas at home, I received a perfume sachet from my sister-in-law.

I is always capital
"I were ..." is not proper English and used as informal language/slang in messages or speaking

It means I will meet my MR in the next year

I am looking forward to meeting the man

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Great writing! :)

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rainbowchen

Feb. 1, 2023

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You are so kind that correct my text。 I will form a habit of write a text。

The present from my sister


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yesterday, when i were home, I received a perfume sachet from my sister-in-law.


yYesterday, when iI wereas at home, I received a perfume sachet from my sister-in-law.

I is always capital "I were ..." is not proper English and used as informal language/slang in messages or speaking

It means I will meet my MR in the next year


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It means I will meet my MR in the next year.

I am looking forward to meeting the man


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am looking forward to meeting the man.

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