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Inesssssss

Jan. 15, 2023

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The Power of Words

Today I was listening a podcast and podcasters were talking about words and wishes. They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in the heart again and again. Eventually, the universe will be recived and will give a feedback. Then, the wishes will be come true. It's not the first time i heard those kind of theories. However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things done. Wishes like goals, figuring out and destructing steps to reach that goal. But I believe that the power of words. I am not a persistent person. This hit me that all the time. Everytime I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't. Now I know every word has their own energy. Negative words cause negative emotions, positive words cause positive outcomes. It's a long impact, like a butterfly effect. The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intelectual. It's emotional.

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The Power of Words

Today I was listening to a podcast and the podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in theyour heart again and again.

or

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in your heart over and over.

Eventually, the universe will be received it and will give a feedback.

Then, the wishes will be come true.

It's not the first time iI had heard those kinds of theories.

"Those" is a plural pronoun so it needs a plural noun.

However, I don't really believe, however, that saying some words will make things donehappen.

Wishes are like goals, to be figuringed out and destructing stepsed into steps in order to reach that goal.

But II do believe thatin the power of words, however.

I am not a persistent person.

This hit me that all the timall at once.

Every time I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keeps telling me I can't.

Now I know every word has theirits own energy.

This is a beautiful sentence.

Negative words cause negative emotions, positive words cause positive outcomes.

It's a long-term impact, like a butterfly effect.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intellectual.

It's emotional.

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I really enjoyed reading this and appreciate that you shared your discovery with us. Good work!

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Inesssssss

Jan. 16, 2023

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Thanksssss~~^.^

The Power of Words

Today I was listening a podcast and podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

Today I was listening to a podcast and the podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in the heart again and again.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in your heart again and again.

Eventually, the universe will be recived and will give a feedback.

Eventually, the universe will receive it and will give feedback.

Then, the wishes will be come true.

Then, the wishes will come true.

It's not the first time i heard those kind of theories.

It's not the first time I've heard those kind of theories.

However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things done.

However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things happen.

Wishes like goals, figuring out and destructing steps to reach that goal.

Wishes like goals, you figure out and construct steps to reach that goal.

But I believe that the power of words.

But I believe in the power of words.

This hit me that all the time.

This hits me all the time.

Everytime I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't.

Every time I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't.

Now I know every word has their own energy.

Now I know every word has its own energy.

Negative words cause negative emotions, positive words cause positive outcomes.

It's a long impact, like a butterfly effect.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intelectual.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intellectual.

It's emotional.

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This is a very good entry. Most of the corrections I made were quite minor. I understood this entry very easily. There was only one line where I wasn't sure what you were trying to say, "Wishes like goals, figuring out and destructing steps to reach that goal." I tried to edit as best as I could. I hope it helped.

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Inesssssss

Jan. 16, 2023

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Thank you for correciting me and reply it sentence by sentence. It helped a lot~
I was trying to describe that decomposing goals. For example, I hope I could have 1million in 3 years. That means I have to earn about 27 thousand a month.

The Power of Words


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Eventually, the universe will be recived and will give a feedback.


Eventually, the universe will be recived and will give a feedback.

Eventually, the universe will receive it and will give feedback.

Eventually, the universe will be received it and will give a feedback.

Then, the wishes will be come true.


Then, the wishes will be come true.

Then, the wishes will come true.

Then, the wishes will be come true.

Today I was listening a podcast and podcasters were talking about words and wishes.


Today I was listening a podcast and podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

Today I was listening to a podcast and the podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

Today I was listening to a podcast and the podcasters were talking about words and wishes.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in the heart again and again.


They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in the heart again and again.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in your heart again and again.

They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in theyour heart again and again.

or They said if you truly want something, you can mark it down and repeat it in your heart over and over.

It's not the first time i heard those kind of theories.


It's not the first time i heard those kind of theories.

It's not the first time I've heard those kind of theories.

It's not the first time iI had heard those kinds of theories.

"Those" is a plural pronoun so it needs a plural noun.

However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things done.


However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things done.

However, I don't really believe that saying some words will make things happen.

However, I don't really believe, however, that saying some words will make things donehappen.

Wishes like goals, figuring out and destructing steps to reach that goal.


Wishes like goals, figuring out and destructing steps to reach that goal.

Wishes like goals, you figure out and construct steps to reach that goal.

Wishes are like goals, to be figuringed out and destructing stepsed into steps in order to reach that goal.

But I believe that the power of words.


But I believe that the power of words.

But I believe in the power of words.

But II do believe thatin the power of words, however.

I am not a persistent person.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This hit me that all the time.


This hit me that all the time.

This hits me all the time.

This hit me that all the timall at once.

Everytime I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't.


Everytime I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't.

Every time I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keep telling me I can't.

Every time I try to do something, the voice in my brain will keeps telling me I can't.

Now I know every word has their own energy.


Now I know every word has their own energy.

Now I know every word has its own energy.

Now I know every word has theirits own energy.

This is a beautiful sentence.

Negative words cause negative emotions, positive words cause positive outcomes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a long impact, like a butterfly effect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a long-term impact, like a butterfly effect.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intelectual.


The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intelectual.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intellectual.

The major barrier to skill acquisition isn't intellectual.

It's emotional.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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