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Jack

March 21, 2023

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The Portrait of the Little Cat

I once had the chance to see some photos of her parents and her uncles, and I was a little shocked: they didn't look like they were Chinese, instead they looked like they were foreigners, so did the little cat. They all had foreign facial features, and that's really strange. Maybe their ancestors came from overseas.

It seems like she is very into sports. I saw a few pictures of her riding a motorcycle. Of course, the motorcycle was really expensive and cool, but the little cat was even cooler than the motorcycle.

She was in very beautiful professional riding clothes and wore a big solid helmet. Unfortunately, people were not able to see her beautiful face.

Some people used to ask her for her real selfie. She agreed. While people kept their breath and waited for her, she sent them an upper body naked selfie and it turned out that it was a boy. People can even count how many ribs the boy had.

She cheated people because she didn't want to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.

She is so energetic that she can stay up too late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommend her to pay attention to her health although she is a young girl.

Writing some things about the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yet. I don't know how she would react when she saw these articles.

Hopefully she will be happy about this article, but if she won't, I will be in trouble because she has an explosive temper and the temper can even kill people.

Hopefully I will be safe with this writing. Okay guys, that is all about the little cat. Thank you for reading.

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The Portraiticture of the Little Cat

The word 'portrait' can be misunderstood as a drawing here.

I once had the chance to seelook at some photos of her parents and her uncles, and I was a little shocked: they didn't look like they were Chinese, instead they looked like they were foreigners, so did 'the little cat'.

They all had foreignve strong facial features that are uncommon among locals, and that's really strange.

If they no longer have those features, then you should use 'had' instead of 'have.

Maybe their ancestors came from overseas.

It seems like she is very into sports.

I saw a few pictures of her riding a motorcycle.

Of course, the motorcycle was really expensive and cool, but 'the little cat was' looked even cooler than the motorcycle.

She was in very bneautifult professional riding clothes and wore a big solid helmet.

Unfortunately, people were not able to see her beautiful face.

Some people used to ask her for her real selfihave asked her to share a selfie with her face clearly visible.

She agreed.

WhileAfter people kept their breath andwere eagerly waiteding for her, she finally sent them an naked upper body naked selfie and itwhich turned out that it was a boyo be a man.

'boy' usually refers to a child. It's safer to use 'man' here unlesss you do mean a child.

People canould even count how many ribs the boyman had.

She cheated people because she didwasn't wantilling to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.

She is so energetic that she can stay up toso late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommenadvised her to pay attention to her health although she still is a young girl.

Writing somI haven't gotten her consent yet to write things about 'the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yet'.

I docan't knowimagine how she would react when she sawif she were to come across these articles.

HopefullyI hope she will be happy about this article, but if she won't, I will beget in trouble because she has an explosive temper and the temper can even kill people.

Hopefully I will be safecould get away with this writing about this.

Okay guys, that is all about the little cat.

Thank you for reading.

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Jack

March 22, 2023

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非常感谢您的修改,我学到了许多短语动词。

They all had foreign facial features, and I found that's really strange.

She was in very beautiful professional riding clothes and she wore a big solid helmet.

Some people used to ask her for her real selfieto take a selfie with them.

While people keptheld their breath and waited for her, she sent them an upper body half-naked selfie and it turned out that itshe was a boy.

She cheated people because she didn't want to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.

She is so energetic that she can stay up toso late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommend her tothat she pay attention to her health although she is a young girl.

Writing some things about the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yeShe has not yet given her permission to write about the little cat.

Wasn't quite sure what you meant here, so I guessed at the meaning a little.

I docan't knowimagine how she would react when she sawif she came across these articles.

Hopefully I will be safe writh this writinging about this.

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Jack

March 21, 2023

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Some people used to ask her for her real selfieto take a selfie with them.

Some WeChat group members once asked her to send a selfie of her to see how she looked.

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Jack

March 21, 2023

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While people keptheld their breath and waited for her, she sent them an upper body half-naked selfie and it turned out that itshe was a boy.

She sent them a half-naked “selfie” and the “selfie” instead was a boy.

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Jack

March 21, 2023

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Writing some things about the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yeShe has not yet given her permission to write about the little cat.

I think you are right. “I haven't asked her permission to write this article yet.” her WeChat name is “the little cat.”

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Jack

March 21, 2023

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Thank you so much!

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vitasoyboi

March 21, 2023

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She sent them a half-naked “selfie” and the “selfie” instead was a boy.

Oh! Sorry I think I was confused, I thought that you meant that she was a boy. She actually sent a selfie of someone else, you mean?

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Jack

March 21, 2023

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Oh! Sorry I think I was confused, I thought that you meant that she was a boy. She actually sent a selfie of someone else, you mean?

Yes. It’s not her.

The Portrait of the Little Cat


The Portraiticture of the Little Cat

The word 'portrait' can be misunderstood as a drawing here.

I once had the chance to see some photos of her parents and her uncles, and I was a little shocked: they didn't look like they were Chinese, instead they looked like they were foreigners, so did the little cat.


I once had the chance to seelook at some photos of her parents and her uncles, and I was a little shocked: they didn't look like they were Chinese, instead they looked like they were foreigners, so did 'the little cat'.

They all had foreign facial features, and that's really strange.


They all had foreign facial features, and I found that's really strange.

They all had foreignve strong facial features that are uncommon among locals, and that's really strange.

If they no longer have those features, then you should use 'had' instead of 'have.

Maybe their ancestors came from overseas.


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It seems like she is very into sports.


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I saw a few pictures of her riding a motorcycle.


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Of course, the motorcycle was really expensive and cool, but the little cat was even cooler than the motorcycle.


Of course, the motorcycle was really expensive and cool, but 'the little cat was' looked even cooler than the motorcycle.

She was in very beautiful professional riding clothes and wore a big solid helmet.


She was in very beautiful professional riding clothes and she wore a big solid helmet.

She was in very bneautifult professional riding clothes and wore a big solid helmet.

Unfortunately, people were not able to see her beautiful face.


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Some people used to ask her for her real selfie.


Some people used to ask her for her real selfieto take a selfie with them.

Some people used to ask her for her real selfihave asked her to share a selfie with her face clearly visible.

She agreed.


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While people kept their breath and waited for her, she sent them an upper body naked selfie and it turned out that it was a boy.


While people keptheld their breath and waited for her, she sent them an upper body half-naked selfie and it turned out that itshe was a boy.

WhileAfter people kept their breath andwere eagerly waiteding for her, she finally sent them an naked upper body naked selfie and itwhich turned out that it was a boyo be a man.

'boy' usually refers to a child. It's safer to use 'man' here unlesss you do mean a child.

People can even count how many ribs the boy had.


People canould even count how many ribs the boyman had.

She cheated people because she didn't want to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.


She cheated people because she didn't want to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.

She cheated people because she didwasn't wantilling to share her photos with strangers, and she was afraid that someone bad guy would use her pictures for bad things.

She is so energetic that she can stay up too late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommend her to pay attention to her health although she is a young girl.


She is so energetic that she can stay up toso late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommend her tothat she pay attention to her health although she is a young girl.

She is so energetic that she can stay up toso late chatting with people in the group, which I don't think is a good habit, so I strongly recommenadvised her to pay attention to her health although she still is a young girl.

Writing some things about the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yet.


Writing some things about the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yeShe has not yet given her permission to write about the little cat.

Wasn't quite sure what you meant here, so I guessed at the meaning a little.

Writing somI haven't gotten her consent yet to write things about 'the little cat hasn't gotten a permit from her yet'.

I don't know how she would react when she saw these articles.


I docan't knowimagine how she would react when she sawif she came across these articles.

I docan't knowimagine how she would react when she sawif she were to come across these articles.

Hopefully she will be happy about this article, but if she won't, I will be in trouble because she has an explosive temper and the temper can even kill people.


HopefullyI hope she will be happy about this article, but if she won't, I will beget in trouble because she has an explosive temper and the temper can even kill people.

Hopefully I will be safe with this writing.


Hopefully I will be safe writh this writinging about this.

Hopefully I will be safecould get away with this writing about this.

Okay guys, that is all about the little cat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for reading.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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