July 11, 2022
The porridge from an axe. (part 1 of 2)
The old soldier went home to spent his vacation. He was tired of the walking and wanted to eat. He came to the village and knocked in the last house.
— Let the tired soldier rest!
The door was opened by the old woman.
— Come in, the soldier.
— Do you have anything to eat?
The old woman had enough food, but she didn't want to feed the soldier and she pretended to be an orphan.
— A kind man, I haven't eaten anything today.
— Ok, no means no.
Then he noticed an axe under a bench.
— Since there is nothing, then I can cook the porridge from an axe.
The hostess was surprised.
— How to cook the porridge from an axe?
— Give me a cauldron.
The old woman brought the cauldron, the soldier washed up the axe, put in the cauldron, poured water and put the cauldron on fire. The old woman watched to the soldier and didn't take her eyes off. The soldier took out a spoon, stirred his porridge and tried it.
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The pPorridge from an aAxe. (p: Part 1 of 2)
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— Let thea tired soldier rest!
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— Come in, the soldier.
— Do you have anything to eat?
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"Orphan" usually refers to a child with no parents.
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The hostessold woman was surprised.
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— How tocan we cook the porridge fromwith an axe?
— Give me a cauldron.
The old woman brought thea cauldron, t. The soldier washed up the axe, put in the cauldron, poured water and putover it and lit a fire under the cauldron on fire.
The old woman watched to the soldier and didn't take her eyes off him.
The soldier took out a spoon, stirred his porridge and tried it.
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July 11, 2022
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The porridge from an axe. (part 1 of 2) The |
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The old soldier went home to spent his vacation.
Definite article "the" is better here because the soldier hasn't been introduced yet. |
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He was tired of the walking and wanted to eat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He came to the village and knocked in the last house. He came to Or, "on the door of the last house". |
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— Let the tired soldier rest! — Let |
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The door was opened by the old woman.
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— Come in, the soldier. — Come in, |
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— Do you have anything to eat? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The old woman had enough food, but she didn't want to feed the soldier and she pretended to be an orphan. The old woman had enough food, but she didn't want to feed the soldier "Orphan" usually refers to a child with no parents. |
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— A kind man, I haven't eaten anything today. — |
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— Ok, no means no. — |
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Then he noticed an axe under a bench. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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— Since there is nothing, then I can cook the porridge from an axe. — |
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The hostess was surprised. The "Hostess" is usually someone who greets guests as a job, like in a hotel or restaurant. |
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— How to cook the porridge from an axe? — How |
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— Give me a cauldron. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The old woman brought the cauldron, the soldier washed up the axe, put in the cauldron, poured water and put the cauldron on fire. The old woman brought |
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The old woman watched to the soldier and didn't take her eyes off. The old woman watched to the soldier and didn't take her eyes off him. |
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The soldier took out a spoon, stirred his porridge and tried it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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