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The pons and cons about people buying foreign products

Nowadays, it is not uncommon that more and more people prefer to buy products from foreign countries. This tend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.
Buying imported products is a good way to raise people’s living standard. Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and sophisticated production process, in the production of these products. When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intense the competition in the market, which can drive down the price. As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there is no foreign product in the local market. Apart from that, customers obtain the benefits from the greater variety choices of goods available on the supermarket shelves.
Importing products can also promote the economic growth of a whole country. During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small business of developed countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings. At the same time, if the trade line about importing can also become an international path for the local upgraded products, the national revenue will get a new high.
The drawback about importing is environmental problems. Most foreign goods experience long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. The carbon dioxide is a good example there. With the increase of carbon dioxide, it will lead to many irreversible changes on the earth, including the increase of temperature and extreme weather conditions, which can definitely have an adverse effect on human being’s long-term development.
In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not be ignored.

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The prons and cons about peopleof buying foreign products

Nowadays, it is not uncommon that more and more people are preferring to buy products from foreign countries.

This trend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to theincreased environmental issues to some extent.

Buying imported products is a good way to raise people’s living standard.

Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and the sophisticated production process, in the production of these products.

When they enter the local market, their superioritiecompetitors are more likely to intencrease the competition in the market, which can drive down the price.

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there is no foreign product in the local marketto previously, with no foreign competition.

Apart from that, customers obtain the benefits from the greater variety choices of goods available on the supermarket shelves.

Importing products can also promote the economic growth of a whole country.

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of their packaging down to the materials of the item, helping small business ofes from developed countries to innovate and optimize their own systems toand thus upgrade their own offeringproducts.

At the same time, if the trade line aboutwith importing can also become an international path for the local upgradly remodelled products, thecausing national revenue will get a new highto increase.

The drawback about importing is its environmental problems.

Most foreign goods experiencuse long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gases into the atmosphere.

The cCarbon dioxide is a good example there.

With the increase of carbon dioxide, it willcould lead to many irreversible changes on the earth, including the increase of temperatures and extreme weather conditions, which canould definitely have an adverse effect on human beingity’s long-term development.

Hypothetical situation requires use of the hypothetical tense (could would etc.)

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not something to be ignored.

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Good job, I agree with everything you’ve said, well done!

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appalachia

Jan. 24, 2023

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Thanks for your patient correction!

The prons and cons about of (people) buying foreign products

It would sound more natural without “people.”

Nowadays, it is not uncommon that more and more people prefer to buy products from foreign countries.

This trend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.

Buying imported products is a good way to raise people’s living standard.

Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as thea colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and sophisticated production processes, (in the production of these products).

“In the production of these products” isn’t necessary.

When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intenseify the competition in the market, which can drive down the prices.

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there iwas no foreign product in the local market.

Apart from that, [customers obtain thebenefits | customers benefits] from the greater variety choices of goods available on the supermarket shelves.

Importing products can also promote the economic growth of a whole country.

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small businesses of developeding countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings.

At the same time, if the trade line aboutfor importing can also become an international path for the local upgradedexporting local products, the national revenue will getachieve a new high.

The drawback aboutof importing is environmental problems.

Most foreign goods experienceundergo long-haul transportation, such as by airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gases into the atmosphere.

The cCarbon dioxide is a good example there.

With tThe increase of carbon dioxide, it will lead to many irreversible changes on the eEarth, including the increase of temperature and extreme weather conditions, which can definitely have an adverse effect on human beings long-term development.

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really haves benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing isare also not to be ignored.

The prons and cons about people buying foreign products

This tenddoes indeed hasve some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.

Importers are usually from those countries whichthat have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers, and a sophisticated production process, in the production of these products.

When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intenseify the competition in the market, which can drive down the price.

intense = adjective
[to] intensify = verb :)

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the timeto when there is no foreign product in the local market.

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessonslearn from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small business of developed countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings.

At the same time, if the importing trade line about importing can also become an international path for the local upgraded products, the national revenue will get a new high.

Most foreign goods experience long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gas into the atmosphere.

TheFor example, carbon dioxide is a good example there.

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not to be ignored.

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Your English is wonderful! I enjoyed reading your views on foreign products, and I could understand anything without any issues. Keep studying :)

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appalachia

Jan. 24, 2023

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Thanks for your encouragement!

The pons and cons about people buying foreign products


The prons and cons about people buying foreign products

The prons and cons about of (people) buying foreign products

It would sound more natural without “people.”

The prons and cons about peopleof buying foreign products

Nowadays, it is not uncommon that more and more people prefer to buy products from foreign countries.


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Nowadays, it is not uncommon that more and more people are preferring to buy products from foreign countries.

This tend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.


This tenddoes indeed hasve some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.

This trend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to the environmental issues to some extent.

This trend indeed has some advantages, even though it could lead to theincreased environmental issues to some extent.

Buying imported products is a good way to raise people’s living standard.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and sophisticated production process, in the production of these products.


Importers are usually from those countries whichthat have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers, and a sophisticated production process, in the production of these products.

Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as thea colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and sophisticated production processes, (in the production of these products).

“In the production of these products” isn’t necessary.

Importers are usually from those countries which have competitive advantages, such as the colorful variety of commodities, the availability of skilled workers and the sophisticated production process, in the production of these products.

When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intense the competition in the market, which can drive down the price.


When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intenseify the competition in the market, which can drive down the price.

intense = adjective [to] intensify = verb :)

When they enter the local market, their superiorities are more likely to intenseify the competition in the market, which can drive down the prices.

When they enter the local market, their superioritiecompetitors are more likely to intencrease the competition in the market, which can drive down the price.

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there is no foreign product in the local market.


As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the timeto when there is no foreign product in the local market.

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there iwas no foreign product in the local market.

As for the customers, they can spend less money on the same item compared with the time when there is no foreign product in the local marketto previously, with no foreign competition.

Apart from that, customers obtain the benefits from the greater variety choices of goods available on the supermarket shelves.


Apart from that, [customers obtain thebenefits | customers benefits] from the greater variety choices of goods available on the supermarket shelves.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Importing products can also promote the economic growth of a whole country.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small business of developed countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings.


During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessonslearn from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small business of developed countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings.

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of the packaging to the materials of the item, helping small businesses of developeding countries innovate and optimize their own systems to upgrade their own offerings.

During the importing process, local factories have a chance to draw lessons from the foreign competitors, ranging from the design of their packaging down to the materials of the item, helping small business ofes from developed countries to innovate and optimize their own systems toand thus upgrade their own offeringproducts.

At the same time, if the trade line about importing can also become an international path for the local upgraded products, the national revenue will get a new high.


At the same time, if the importing trade line about importing can also become an international path for the local upgraded products, the national revenue will get a new high.

At the same time, if the trade line aboutfor importing can also become an international path for the local upgradedexporting local products, the national revenue will getachieve a new high.

At the same time, if the trade line aboutwith importing can also become an international path for the local upgradly remodelled products, thecausing national revenue will get a new highto increase.

The drawback about importing is environmental problems.


The drawback aboutof importing is environmental problems.

The drawback about importing is its environmental problems.

Most foreign goods experience long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gas in the atmosphere.


Most foreign goods experience long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gas into the atmosphere.

Most foreign goods experienceundergo long-haul transportation, such as by airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gases into the atmosphere.

Most foreign goods experiencuse long-haul transportation, such as airplanes or railways, all of which could emit greenhouse gases into the atmosphere.

The carbon dioxide is a good example there.


TheFor example, carbon dioxide is a good example there.

The cCarbon dioxide is a good example there.

The cCarbon dioxide is a good example there.

With the increase of carbon dioxide, it will lead to many irreversible changes on the earth, including the increase of temperature and extreme weather conditions, which can definitely have an adverse effect on human being’s long-term development.


With tThe increase of carbon dioxide, it will lead to many irreversible changes on the eEarth, including the increase of temperature and extreme weather conditions, which can definitely have an adverse effect on human beings long-term development.

With the increase of carbon dioxide, it willcould lead to many irreversible changes on the earth, including the increase of temperatures and extreme weather conditions, which canould definitely have an adverse effect on human beingity’s long-term development.

Hypothetical situation requires use of the hypothetical tense (could would etc.)

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not be ignored.


In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not to be ignored.

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really haves benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing isare also not to be ignored.

In conclusion, I believe that buying products made by other countries really have benefits for individuals and the whole society, but the environmental issues caused by importing is also not something to be ignored.

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