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The Plant

One thing I’ve always wondered about is the writing process. Every time I want to write about something abstract, something that doesn’t have a strict structure, I feel embarrassed as though I’m a hollow shell, a person, who has nothing to say. But, once I start typing, everything clears up, and I miraculously manage to find words.

Recently, the place where I live has been becoming darker and colder. Every day I look out the window and see mountains shrouded in mist, frozen forest and from time to time, if I’m lucky, some sun. Cold makes me frozen from inside and before I even know, I becomе moody and anxious. I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which are cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading. Once I start doing something with my hands, or distract myself with a good book, I finally stop thinking about my plans and goals, about severe weather and cold.

I also have a flower at my house which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood. Well, it’s not really a flower. I would say it’s a weed from a foreign country, maybe from India or Japan. This plant was presented to me by a friend who is an avid traveller and has visited a lot of countries. When I was given a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it was just some average plant. As it turned out, it was not.

At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it grew so big that I had to repot it in a huge pot. I was confused by its quick growth, so I started surfing the Internet to figure out how to care of him. From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in the appropriate environment. My plant has never bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting. After all, it turned out to be quite engaging to care of.

In summer and autumn, I had moved my plant to the balcony and had been letting it stay there until dark. In those months, the plant had been growing new stems and had looked quite healthy. But since the winter has come, I've had to leave the weed indoors and, sadly, it is looking worse now. First thing every morning, I move the pot with the plant to one of the different rooms, trying to find the sunniest place for it. There's also no sun for many days now, so often I have to move the pot under a lamp. Nevertheless, it’s still looking unhealthy, though I try daily to find the sunniest spot and water it regularly.

By the way, this plant doesn’t like water. I was surprised when I read it, but it turned out to be true. I shouldn’t water it too much, otherwise it will die. Isn’t it weird, given the fact that almost any plant, except cactuses, likes water? But, my plant doesn’t look like a cactus at all. So all I actually do is occasionally splash it with water and move it to different places in my home.

There was also a mishap with this plant a couple of weeks ago, which made me feel as a totally unreliable person who can’t properly care even about a plant. The weed has grown up so much that it fell down under its own weight, almost broking down its main stem. When I saw what had happened, I did nothing, thinking “Who knows, maybe this plant should grow like this?” Only after a day or two did I realize that there’s probably almost no plants on the Earth which growing up horizontally. With this disturbing thought, I began surfing the Internet, trying to figure out how to repair my unfortunate weed.

Speaking frankly, plenty of advices from plant lovers looked at the very least odd. For instance, one of them offered me to just let my plant die, because there’s nothing I can do. “Still,” told me the guy, “you can collect seeds and plant a new, exactly the same weed.”

As you can understand, under no circumstances would I let my plant die, pretending there’s nothing wrong with that. So after all this searching and googling, I eventually managed to find a way to repair my plant—namely, I should have created support for its stems from wands. Since I’ve never aspired to become a gardener, my attempts to repair my poor weed were remaining futile until I really concentrated on this task. I was turning stems this way and that, worrying that I have already caused more harm than help. After many attempts, I finally got through it.

So, now my plant has crutches from wands. I'll be blunt— now it's looking ridiculous, not to say scary. The plant reminds me of a clumsy fluffy alien, with its protruding stems and wands. Although the weed is looking weird, it seems that after the “operation” it feels better, because it has been turning bright green today. I hope that one day I’ll be lucky to see how its blossom, even though I don't hold out much hope.

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The Plant

One thing that (has) always (has) made me wonder is the process of writing.

more natural: One thing I’ve always wondered about is the writing process.

Every time (when) I want to write about something abstract, something that doesn’t have a strict structure, I feel embarrassed as though I’m a hollow shell, a person, who has nothing to say.

The word “when” is rarely necessary in the phrase “time when.”

But, once I start typing, everything clears up, and I miraculously manage to find (the needed) words.

If you want to keep “needed,” add “the,” but I would omit both.

Recently, the place where I live has been becoming darker and colder.

Every day I look out the window and see mountains shrouded in mist, frozen forest and from time to time, if I’m lucky, some sun.

Cold makes me frozen from inside and before I even know, I becomе moody and anxious.

I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which isare cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.

Once I start doing something with my hands, or distract myself with a good book, I finally stop thinking about my plans and goals, about severe weather and cold.

I also hasve a flower at my house which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood.

Well, it’s not really a flower.

I would say it’s a weed from a foreign country, maybe from India or Japan.

This plant was presented to me fromby a friend who is an avid traveller and has visited a lot of countries.

When I was given with a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it was just some average plant.

As it turned out, it was not.

At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it has grown[grew up so much so| grew so big | grew so tall] that I had to repot it in a huge pot.

“Grew up” usually describes the age of a person.

Delete “so” before “that.”

I was confused withby its quick growing (growth), so I started surfing the Internet (so as) to figure out how to care of himit.

“Growing” and “so as” are unnatural but not wrong.

From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in an (or: the) appropriate environment.

More natural.

Since then, mMy plant has never (yet) bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.

“Since then” still doesn’t make sense, because we don’t know when “then” is—“I’ve found” in the previous sentence implies that you’re still searching, not a specific time when you searched.

It would sound more natural without “yet.”

Since that day (Since then?), my plant has never yet bloomed (never bloomed again?), but I don’t mind waiting.

“That day” sounds odd, because you haven’t described a specific day before this sentence.

“Never yet bloomed” sounds like it has never, ever bloomed.

After all, it turned out to be quite engaging to care of him.

In summer and autumn, I had moved my / the plant to the balcony and had been letting himit stay there until the dark.

In those months, the plant had been givrowing new stems and had looked quite healthy.

But since the winter came / hads caome, I’ve had to leave the weed inside home/ indoors and, sadly, it has beenis looking worse now.

Every day after I’ve woken up / First thing every morning, I move the pot with the plant to one of the different rooms, trying to find the most sunnysunniest place for it.

There's also no sun for many days now, so often I have to move the pot under the / a lamp.

Nevertheless, it’s still looking unhealthy, though I try daily try to find the most sunny placesunniest place / spot and water himit regularly.

By the way, this plant doesn’t like water.

I was surprised when I had read it, but it turned out to be true.

I shouldn’t water himit too much, otherwise it will die.

“Him” is very unusual for a plant. Since you’ve used “it” later in the sentence, you might as well be consistent.

Isn’t it weird, given the fact that almost any plant, except cactuses, likes water?

MeanwhileBut, my plant doesn’t look like a cactus at all.

So everything whatall I actually do is occasionally splash himit with water / splash water on it and move the pot / move it to different places atin my home.

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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I shouldn’t water himit too much, otherwise it will die.

thank you

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which isare cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.

I've learnt that gerund is always singular, isn't that right?

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it has grown[grew up so much so| grew so big | grew so tall] that I had to repot it in a huge pot.

thank you

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Dec. 11, 2022

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Since that day (Since then?), my plant has never yet bloomed (never bloomed again?), but I don’t mind waiting.

thank you. "never yet bloomed" is right because it never, ever bloomed. I didn't see its flowers.

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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thank you so much for your help here!

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JoeTofu

Dec. 11, 2022

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I've learnt that gerund is always singular, isn't that right?

An individual gerund is singular, but you’ve listed five, so they are plural. Furthermore, “ways” is plural.

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JoeTofu

Dec. 11, 2022

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thank you. "never yet bloomed" is right because it never, ever bloomed. I didn't see its flowers.

I’ve corrected this sentence again.

And you’re welcome. :-)

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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An individual gerund is singular, but you’ve listed five, so they are plural. Furthermore, “ways” is plural.

that's right, thnx

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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Since then, mMy plant has never (yet) bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.

thank you 🙏

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Rumble_Bumble

Dec. 11, 2022

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I’ve corrected this sentence again. And you’re welcome. :-)

😊🙏

The Plant


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One thing that always has made me wonder is the process of writing.


One thing that (has) always (has) made me wonder is the process of writing.

more natural: One thing I’ve always wondered about is the writing process.

Every time when I want to write about something abstract, something that doesn’t have a strict structure, I feel embarrassed as though I’m a hollow shell, a person, who has nothing to say.


Every time (when) I want to write about something abstract, something that doesn’t have a strict structure, I feel embarrassed as though I’m a hollow shell, a person, who has nothing to say.

The word “when” is rarely necessary in the phrase “time when.”

But, once I start typing, everything clears up, and I miraculously manage to find needed words.


But, once I start typing, everything clears up, and I miraculously manage to find (the needed) words.

If you want to keep “needed,” add “the,” but I would omit both.

Recently, the place where I live has been becoming darker and colder.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every day I look out the window and see mountains shrouded in mist, frozen forest and from time to time, if I’m lucky, some sun.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Cold makes me frozen from inside and before I even know, I becomе moody and anxious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don’t like this state of being, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which is cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.


Once I start to do something with my hands, or distract myself with a good book, I finally stop thinking about my plans and goals, about severe weather and cold.


I also has a flower in my room which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood.


Well, it’s not really a flower.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would say it’s a weed from a foreign country, maybe from India or Japan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This plant was presented to me from a friend who is an avid traveller and has visited a lot of countries.


This plant was presented to me fromby a friend who is an avid traveller and has visited a lot of countries.

When I was given with a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it’s just some average plant.


As it turned out, it was not.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it has grown up so much so that I had to repot it in a huge pot.


At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it has grown[grew up so much so| grew so big | grew so tall] that I had to repot it in a huge pot.

“Grew up” usually describes the age of a person. Delete “so” before “that.”

I was confused with its quick growing, so I started surfing the Internet so as to figure out how to care of him.


I was confused withby its quick growing (growth), so I started surfing the Internet (so as) to figure out how to care of himit.

“Growing” and “so as” are unnatural but not wrong.

From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in appropriate environment.


Since that day, my plant has never yet bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.


Since that day (Since then?), my plant has never yet bloomed (never bloomed again?), but I don’t mind waiting.

“That day” sounds odd, because you haven’t described a specific day before this sentence. “Never yet bloomed” sounds like it has never, ever bloomed.

After all, it turned out to be quite engaging to care of him.


After all, it turned out to be quite engaging to care of him.

In summer and autumn, I moved my plant to the balcony and was letting him stay there until the dark.


In those months, the plant was giving new roots and looked quite healthy.


But since the winter had came, I have to leave the weed inside home and, sadly, it has been looking worse now.


Every day after I’ve woken up, I move the pot with the plant to one of the different rooms, trying to find the most sunny place for it.


Every day after I’ve woken up / First thing every morning, I move the pot with the plant to one of the different rooms, trying to find the most sunnysunniest place for it.

There's also no sun for many days now, so often I have to move the pot under the lamp.


There's also no sun for many days now, so often I have to move the pot under the / a lamp.

Nevertheless, it’s still looking unhealthy, though I daily try to find the most sunny place and water him regularly.


Nevertheless, it’s still looking unhealthy, though I try daily try to find the most sunny placesunniest place / spot and water himit regularly.

By the way, this plant doesn’t like water.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was surprised when I had read it, but it turned out to be true.


I was surprised when I had read it, but it turned out to be true.

I shouldn’t water him too much, otherwise it will die.


I shouldn’t water himit too much, otherwise it will die.

“Him” is very unusual for a plant. Since you’ve used “it” later in the sentence, you might as well be consistent.

Isn’t it weird, given the fact that almost every plants, except cactuses, like water?


Meanwhile, my plant doesn’t look like cactus at all.


MeanwhileBut, my plant doesn’t look like a cactus at all.

So everything what I actually do is occasionally splash him with water and move the pot to different places at home.


So everything whatall I actually do is occasionally splash himit with water / splash water on it and move the pot / move it to different places atin my home.

There was also a mishap with this plant a couple of weeks ago, which made me feel as a totally unreliable person who can’t properly care even about a plant.


The weed has grown up so much that it fell down under its own weight, almost broking down its main stem.


When I saw what had happened, I did nothing, thinking “Who knows, maybe this plant should grow like this?” Only after a day or two did I realize that there’s probably almost no plants on the Earth which growing up horizontally.


With this disturbing thought, I began surfing the Internet, trying to figure out how to repair my unfortunate weed.


Frankly speaking, plenty of advices from plant lovers looked at the very least odd.


For instance, one of them had offered me just let my plant die, because there’s nothing I can do.


“Still,” told the adviser, “you can collect seeds and plant a new, exactly the same weed.”


As you can understand, under no circumstances I would let my plant die, pretending there’s nothing wrong with that.


So after all this searching and googling, I eventually managed to find a way to repair my plant—namely, I should create support for its stems from wands.


Since I’ve never aspired to become a gardener, my attempts to repair my poor weed were remaining futile until I really concentrated on this task.


I was turning stems this way and that, worrying that I already have caused more harm than help.


After many attempts, I finally got through it.


So, now my plant has crutches from wands which looks quite ridiculous, not to say scary.


It reminds me of a clumsy fluffy alien, with its protruding stems and wands.


Although the weed is looking weird, it seems that after the “operation” it feels better, because it has been turning bright green today.


I hope that one day I’ll be lucky to see how its blossom, even though I don't hold out much hope on that.


I also has a flower at my house which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood.


I also hasve a flower at my house which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood.

Once I start doing something with my hands, or distract myself with a good book, I finally stop thinking about my plans and goals, about severe weather and cold.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was given with a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it was just some average plant.


When I was given with a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it was just some average plant.

In those months, the plant had been giving new stems and had looked quite healthy.


In those months, the plant had been givrowing new stems and had looked quite healthy.

But since the winter had came, I had to leave the weed inside home and, sadly, it has been looking worse now.


But since the winter came / hads caome, I’ve had to leave the weed inside home/ indoors and, sadly, it has beenis looking worse now.

In summer and autumn, had moved my plant to the balcony and had been letting him stay there until the dark.


In summer and autumn, I had moved my / the plant to the balcony and had been letting himit stay there until the dark.

Isn’t it weird, given the fact that almost any plant, except cactuses, likes water?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Speaking frankly, plenty of advices from plant lovers looked at the very least odd.


For instance, one of them offered me just let my plant die, because there’s nothing I can do.


“Still,” told me the guy, “you can collect seeds and plant a new, exactly the same weed.”


As you can understand, under no circumstances would I let my plant die, pretending there’s nothing wrong with that.


So, now my plant has crutches from wands.


I'll be blunt— now it's looking ridiculous, not to say scary.


The plant reminds me of a clumsy fluffy alien, with its protruding stems and wands.


I hope that one day I’ll be lucky to see how its blossom, even though I don't hold out much hope.


I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which is cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.


I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which isare cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.

From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in an appropriate environment.


From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in an (or: the) appropriate environment.

More natural.

I was turning stems this way and that, worrying that I have already caused more harm than help.


So after all this searching and googling, I eventually managed to find a way to repair my plant—namely, I should have created support for its stems from wands.


For instance, one of them offered me to just let my plant die, because there’s nothing I can do.


One thing I’ve always wondered about is the writing process.


Every time I want to write about something abstract, something that doesn’t have a strict structure, I feel embarrassed as though I’m a hollow shell, a person, who has nothing to say.


But, once I start typing, everything clears up, and I miraculously manage to find words.


I also have a flower at my house which I care about and which also somehow improves my mood.


This plant was presented to me by a friend who is an avid traveller and has visited a lot of countries.


When I was given a seed, I wasn’t told anything about it, so I thought it was just some average plant.


At first, the weed was only a small sprout, but then it grew so big that I had to repot it in a huge pot.


I was confused by its quick growth, so I started surfing the Internet to figure out how to care of him.


From what I’ve found, the plant will bloom with amazing crimson flowers, if it resides in the appropriate environment.


Since then, my plant has never yet bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.


Since then, mMy plant has never (yet) bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.

“Since then” still doesn’t make sense, because we don’t know when “then” is—“I’ve found” in the previous sentence implies that you’re still searching, not a specific time when you searched. It would sound more natural without “yet.”

After all, it turned out to be quite engaging to care of.


In summer and autumn, I had moved my plant to the balcony and had been letting it stay there until dark.


In those months, the plant had been growing new stems and had looked quite healthy.


But since the winter has come, I've had to leave the weed indoors and, sadly, it is looking worse now.


First thing every morning, I move the pot with the plant to one of the different rooms, trying to find the sunniest place for it.


There's also no sun for many days now, so often I have to move the pot under a lamp.


Nevertheless, it’s still looking unhealthy, though I try daily to find the sunniest spot and water it regularly.


I was surprised when I read it, but it turned out to be true.


I shouldn’t water it too much, otherwise it will die.


But, my plant doesn’t look like a cactus at all.


So all I actually do is occasionally splash it with water and move it to different places in my home.


I don’t like this state of mind, so I try to avoid it in various ways, among which are cooking, listening to music, writing, and reading.


My plant has never bloomed, but I don’t mind waiting.


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