Oct. 18, 2021
The picture
I'm looking at the picture. A house is painted on it. The house is tall and white. There is light in the windows. The house is surrounded by trees and bushes. There are grey clouds in the sky. The red light of the evening sun shines through the clouds.
The picture
I'm looking at thea picture.
It would be better to use "a" instead of "the", as this is the first time that the picture is introduced, and the reader is not yet aware of the specific picture mentioned.
Feedback
Overall, your writing is not bad! However, one improvement could be to add conjunctions or connectors. This would make it smoother to read. For example, words such as "meanwhile" and "furthermore" can be added to the start of a sentence, and the word "while" could be used to join two sentences. :)
Oct. 30, 2021
Thank you!
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The picture This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm looking at the picture. I'm looking at It would be better to use "a" instead of "the", as this is the first time that the picture is introduced, and the reader is not yet aware of the specific picture mentioned. |
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A house is painted on it. |
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The house is tall and white. |
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There is light in the windows. |
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The house is surrounded by trees and bushes. |
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There are grey clouds in the sky. |
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The red light of the evening sun shines through the clouds. |
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