July 14, 2023
the person who inspires me
I would like to write about a person who inspires me. It’s a traveller - Antony. He has traveled to many countries around the world, visited a lot of beautiful places. He shoots all his adventures on camera, and then mounts the videos. He has own YouTube channel. I am inspired by how free this person is, he does what he wants, learns the world, discovers something new for himself.
the person who inspires me
I would like to write about a person who inspires me.
It’s a traveller - Antony.
He has traveled to many countries around the world, and visited a lot of beautiful places.
He shoots all of his adventures on camera, and then mounts the videos.
He has owna YouTube channel.
Has to declare ownership, no need for own here.
I am inspired by how free this person is, he does what he wants, learns the world, discovers something new for himself.
Feedback
Good job.
You accidentally tagged it as Arabic though.
I would like to write about a person who inspires me.
It’s a traveller - Antony.
He has traveled to many countries around the world, visited a lot of beautiful places.
He shoots all his adventures on camera, and then mounts the videos.
He has own YouTube channel.
Feedback
I am not a native English speaker , your writing was good but i have one comment about "learn the world" I don't know exactly what you mean by that ,, maybe you could write " learn from the world or from the life "
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It’s a traveller - Antony. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He has traveled to many countries around the world, visited a lot of beautiful places. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He has traveled to many countries around the world, and visited a lot of beautiful places. |
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He shoots all his adventures on camera, and then mounts the videos. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He shoots all of his adventures on camera, and then mounts the videos. |
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He has own YouTube channel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He has Has to declare ownership, no need for own here. |
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I am inspired by how free this person is, he does what he wants, learns the world, discovers something new for himself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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