Aug. 13, 2025
The Perseids meteor shower
Last night I was being on a mountain peak and looking at the sky. The moon was bright like a flashlight, its radiance interfered with observations. But I saw too bright bolide!
The first time I saw the Perseids in 2019, when I living in National Park towards Daugavpils. There was no Moon there. Millions of shining stars looking dawn on me. The Milky Way’s perfectly bright, like a brilliant shine. It was amazing!
I often called my friends and we spent nights together, with the stars and meteors. “Barlow lens”, “The brightness of a star”, “Telescopes” — I spoke about everything. Those exiting nights will remain in my memory forever.
Do you like looking at the stars?
The Perseids meteor shower
Last night, I was being on a mountain peak and looking up at the sky.
The moon was as bright likeas a flashlight, and its radiance interfered with the observations.
But I saw tooa very bright bolide!
Use “very bright” to describe something impressive. “Too bright” can sound negative
The first time I saw the Perseids was in 2019, when I was living in Na national Park towardsnear Daugavpils.
There was no Mmoon thereat night.
Millions of shining stars were looking daown on me.
The Milky Way’ was perfectly bright, like a brilliant shinelight.
It was amazing!
I often called my friends, and we spent nights together, with under the stars and, watching meteors.
“Barlow lens”es, “The brightness of a star”s, “Telescopes” — I spotalked about everything.
Those exciting nights will remain in my memory forever.
Do you like looking at the stars?
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Your story was beautiful and heartfelt. I loved how you described the night sky, the meteors, and your memories with friends—it felt so real and peaceful
Aug. 13, 2025
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Last night I was being on a mountain peak and looking at the sky. Last night, I was |
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The moon was bright like a flashlight, its radiance interfered with observations. The moon was as bright |
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But I saw too bright bolide! But I saw Use “very bright” to describe something impressive. “Too bright” can sound negative |
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The first time I saw the Perseids in 2019, when I living in National Park towards Daugavpils. The first time I saw the Perseids was in 2019, when I was living in |
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There was no Moon there. There was no |
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Millions of shining stars looking dawn on me. Millions of shining stars were looking d |
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The Milky Way’s perfectly bright, like a brilliant shine. The Milky Way |
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It was amazing! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I often called my friends and we spent nights together, with the stars and meteors. I often called my friends, and we spent nights together |
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“Barlow lens”, “The brightness of a star”, “Telescopes” — I spoke about everything.
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Those exiting nights will remain in my memory forever. Those exciting nights will remain in my memory forever. |
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Do you like looking at the stars? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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