Feb. 18, 2021
The Period of New Semester
Japanese universities start their classes from April, while universities in western countries and China start from September. Last year, a project team in the ruling party, Liberal Democratic Party, suggested that Japanese universities should change (be consistence with?) their admission schedules same as foreign universities. But, this proposal was strongly criticized by public opinions and was finally turned down.
However, I agree with their proposal that Japanese universities also should start their first semester from September. It was a suitable timing to change academic calendars since class cancellation due to the COVID-19 pandemic gave a sufficient period of time.
One of the advantages is that it becomes easier for motivated students to apply for exchange programs. Learning foreign cultures, languages, and the different way of thinking around their 20 years old cause significant impact on their life.
In addition, universities would recover their competitive at scientific fields if the number of foreign students have been increasing.
In my opinion, we have to discuss pros and cons before criticizing inacceptable proposals.
The Period ofStart of the New Semester
Japanese universities start their classes from April, while universities in western countries and China start from September.
Last year, a project team in the ruling party, the Liberal Democratic Party, suggested that Japanese universities should change (be consistence with?) their admission schedules same asto be consistent with foreign universities.
ButHowever, this proposal was strongly criticized by the public opinions and was finally turned down.
It's usually said that "but" at the start of a sentence is wrong, although a lot of people do use it as a style choice.
However, I agree with their proposal that Japanese universities also should also start their first semester fromyear in September.
As I changed to however in the last sentence (not 100% necessary), I wouldn't use it again in this one.
It was a suitable timinge to change academic calendars since class cancellation due to the COVID-19 pandemic gave a sufficient period of timeto do it.
I'd use "it was a suitable time" or "it was good timing".
One of the advantages is that it becomes easier for motivated students to apply for exchange programs.
Learning foreign cultures, languages, and the different way of thinking around their 20 years old causethis encourages around the age of 20 can have a significant impact on their life.
In addition, universities would recover their competitive at scientific fields if the number of foreign students have been increasinges.
I'm not sure what "recover their competitive" means, maybe "have more chance against competitors" or "rank up in the leaderboards" or something along those lines?
In my opinion, we have to discuss the pros and cons before criticizing inacceptable proposalsproposals just because they are not widely accepted.
For the last part after "before", I don't know about using the word "criticizing" but I'm really not sure how to phrase it! I'd maybe say:
"before rejecting proposals [just because some people do not accept them]"
"before marking proposals as unacceptable [just because some people disagree]"
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Japanese universities start their classes from April, while universities in western countries and China start from September. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last year, a project team in the ruling party, Liberal Democratic Party, suggested that Japanese universities should change (be consistence with?) their admission schedules same as foreign universities. Last year, a project team in the ruling party, the Liberal Democratic Party, suggested that Japanese universities should change |
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But, this proposal was strongly criticized by public opinions and was finally turned down.
It's usually said that "but" at the start of a sentence is wrong, although a lot of people do use it as a style choice. |
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However, I agree with their proposal that Japanese universities also should start their first semester from September. However, I agree with their proposal that Japanese universities As I changed to however in the last sentence (not 100% necessary), I wouldn't use it again in this one. |
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It was a suitable timing to change academic calendars since class cancellation due to the COVID-19 pandemic gave a sufficient period of time. It was a suitable tim I'd use "it was a suitable time" or "it was good timing". |
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One of the advantages is that it becomes easier for motivated students to apply for exchange programs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Learning foreign cultures, languages, and the different way of thinking around their 20 years old cause significant impact on their life. Learning foreign cultures, languages, and the different way of thinking |
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In addition, universities would recover their competitive at scientific fields if the number of foreign students have been increasing. In addition, universities would recover their competitive at scientific fields if the number of foreign students I'm not sure what "recover their competitive" means, maybe "have more chance against competitors" or "rank up in the leaderboards" or something along those lines? |
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In my opinion, we have to discuss pros and cons before criticizing inacceptable proposals. In my opinion, we have to discuss the pros and cons before criticizing For the last part after "before", I don't know about using the word "criticizing" but I'm really not sure how to phrase it! I'd maybe say: "before rejecting proposals [just because some people do not accept them]" "before marking proposals as unacceptable [just because some people disagree]" |
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