The paradox of the grand days.

What is the "grand days"? It's a bit vague.

My country and city have them memorable days, as, i such as Independence dDay, the mMother’s day, love and friendship day (Valentin's day), and Christmas, among others.

These holidays are meant for joy and celebration, but in many cases, it ends up in violence.

It is incredible to listen through news and the preparation of specialthat goes into the police squad against violence in the celebration of love and friendship day (during Valentine's day). It is so painful know that the mto learn during Mother's day, the day thatwhere we celebrated to the person that we love most, it becomes a the most violent day in the country.

Avoid using the term "love and friendship day" and simply call it Valentine's day.

The "special police squad" is a bit unclear.

Why must a happy day end in a sadness onegrief?

I think that violence emerges during these special days by holdholidays because of resentments and have an alcohol drinkism.

These holidays exposprovoke emotional and mental health asissues in society, family, and the individual.

Valentine's day and mother's day are both holidays. Instead of writing "these days", it's best to be a bit descriptive of which days you mean.

I think that special police squad is insufficient to the bottome police is not doing their part to correct the problem; we need diverse resources to givecome up with solutions to social problem ands, so the days of celebration going not become inat holidays are not days of mourning.

Avoid the usage of "special police squad" since it's too general and unclear. I would just simply say "the police".