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There's a small restaurant near our office building, the dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable. The atmosphere there is cozy too. I often have launch or dinner there.
But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office. The company has lots of staff and they also like to eat in the restaurant. Gradually, the restaurant becomes overcrowded. I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it's really frustrating. I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.
I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.
There's a small restaurant near our office building, t. The dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.
The atmosphere there is cozy, too.
I often have launch or dinner there.
But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.
Gradually, the restaurant becoames overcrowded.
I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it'. It’s really frustrating.
I fear that the quality of the dishes there will decline and that the prices will raiincrease in the future.
I think that maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.
The Overcrowded Restaurant
There's a small restaurant near our office building, the dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.
The atmosphere there is cozy too.
I often have launch or dinner there.
But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.
The company has lots of staff and they also like to eat in the restaurant.
Gradually, the restaurant has becomes overcrowded.
I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it's really frustrating.
I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.
A lot of native speakers would make this mistake, but "raise" is a transitive verb, i.e. it needs an object.
Good: "the owners will raise the price"
Good: "the price will rise"
I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.
Grammar is okay, but "fit" seems like strange word choice to me. I would just delete it to sound the most natural.
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I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner. I think maybe I should try to find another Grammar is okay, but "fit" seems like strange word choice to me. I would just delete it to sound the most natural. I think that maybe I should try to find another |
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