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The Overcrowded Restaurant

There's a small restaurant near our office building, the dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable. The atmosphere there is cozy too. I often have launch or dinner there.
But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office. The company has lots of staff and they also like to eat in the restaurant. Gradually, the restaurant becomes overcrowded. I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it's really frustrating. I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.
I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.

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There's a small restaurant near our office building, t. The dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.

The atmosphere there is cozy, too.

I often have launch or dinner there.

But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.

Gradually, the restaurant becoames overcrowded.

I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it'. It’s really frustrating.

I fear that the quality of the dishes there will decline and that the prices will raiincrease in the future.

I think that maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.

The Overcrowded Restaurant

There's a small restaurant near our office building, the dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.

The atmosphere there is cozy too.

I often have launch or dinner there.

But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.

The company has lots of staff and they also like to eat in the restaurant.

Gradually, the restaurant has becomes overcrowded.

I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it's really frustrating.

I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.

A lot of native speakers would make this mistake, but "raise" is a transitive verb, i.e. it needs an object.
Good: "the owners will raise the price"
Good: "the price will rise"

I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.

Grammar is okay, but "fit" seems like strange word choice to me. I would just delete it to sound the most natural.

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The Overcrowded Restaurant


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There's a small restaurant near our office building, the dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There's a small restaurant near our office building, t. The dishes are delicious and the price is reasonable.

The atmosphere there is cozy too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The atmosphere there is cozy, too.

I often have launch or dinner there.


I often have launch or dinner there.

I often have launch or dinner there.

But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But since last week, a company moved into a building near our office.

The company has lots of staff and they also like to eat in the restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Gradually, the restaurant becomes overcrowded.


Gradually, the restaurant has becomes overcrowded.

Gradually, the restaurant becoames overcrowded.

I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it's really frustrating.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to wait for more than twenty minutes to eat there, it'. It’s really frustrating.

I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.


I fear the quality of the dishes there will decline and the price will raise in the future.

A lot of native speakers would make this mistake, but "raise" is a transitive verb, i.e. it needs an object. Good: "the owners will raise the price" Good: "the price will rise"

I fear that the quality of the dishes there will decline and that the prices will raiincrease in the future.

I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.


I think maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.

Grammar is okay, but "fit" seems like strange word choice to me. I would just delete it to sound the most natural.

I think that maybe I should try to find another fit restaurant to have lunch or dinner.

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