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The Odd Taxi

I finish watching the animation series "The Odd Taxi" today. It is the first animation series that I have watched this year because of someone's recommendation. And it doesn't disppointe me.
There were many voice elements in the series. First, Manzai. I don't really think Manzai is fun sometimes while I don't like other similar talk show as well. I think the players ridicule for ridiculing. They act too hard sometimes and treat the audiences like fools.
Second, rap. A young man with typical Jananese fashion men idols' hair style, which is long and big and most of their eyes are cover by their bangs. In the whole series, he only says two dialogues in an emergency in the last episode. What's the most amusing thing is that his subordinate corrects him that he hasn't been in rhyme immediately. It is a spark of the episode.
Third, Bollywood element. There is a lady who can do Capoeira. But everytime she shows how to do Capoeira, the BGM is Indian music. So the chief actor makes fun of her, "I thought that you would dance at once, like the Bollywood movies."
Fourth, Japanese wonder girls (girls group). To be honest, I dislike this kind of music. I think their target audiences are men especially the geeks, through titillating.
Maybe there are more elements I didn't recognise. But I sincerely recommend the show to you all.

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The Odd Taxi

I finish watching the animation series "The Odd Taxi" today.

It is the first animation series that I have watched this year because ofdue to someone's recommendation.

And it doesIt didn't disappointe me.

Watching the series happened in the past and so the feeling that you're talking about was also in the past.

There were many voice elemenaspects in the series.

First,: Manzai.

I don't really think Manzai is fun someat times whilehowever I don't like other similar talk show as well.

I think the players ridicule for ridiculingjust for the sake of it.

The phrase "just for the sake of it" can mean that the players are doing it just because they are expected to do it.

They act too hard someoveract at times and treat the audiences like as fools.

"act too hard" would be fine but there's a specific word for this.

Second,: rap.

AThere was a young man with a typical Janpanese fashion men idols'able hair style, which is long and, big and with most of their eyes are covered by their bangs.

IHe only says two things in the wholentire series, he only says two dialogues and those are during an emergency in the last episode.

What's tThe most amusing thing is that his subordinate corrects him thatbecause he hasn't been in rhyme immediatelyon cue.

It is a sparkhighlight of the episode.

Third,: Bollywood element.

There is a lady who can do Capoeira.

ButHowever, every time that she shows how to do Ccapoeira, the BGMbackground music is Indian music.

BGM isn't a common acronym in English.

So the chiefThe main actor makes fun of her, because of this, saying "I thought that you would dance at once, like the Bollywood movies."

Fourth,: Japanese wonder girls (girls group).

To be honest, I dislike this kind of music.

I think their target audiences are is men, especially the geeks, throughfor the purpose of titillationg.

Maybe there arThere may be more elements that I didn't recognise.

But IIn all, I would sincerely recommend the show to you all.

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The Odd Taxi


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I finish watching the animation series "The Odd Taxi" today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is the first animation series that I have watched this year because of someone's recommendation.


It is the first animation series that I have watched this year because ofdue to someone's recommendation.

And it doesn't disppointe me.


And it doesIt didn't disappointe me.

Watching the series happened in the past and so the feeling that you're talking about was also in the past.

There were many voice elements in the series.


There were many voice elemenaspects in the series.

First, Manzai.


First,: Manzai.

I don't really think Manzai is fun sometimes while I don't like other similar talk show as well.


I don't really think Manzai is fun someat times whilehowever I don't like other similar talk show as well.

I think the players ridicule for ridiculing.


I think the players ridicule for ridiculingjust for the sake of it.

The phrase "just for the sake of it" can mean that the players are doing it just because they are expected to do it.

They act too hard sometimes and treat the audiences like fools.


They act too hard someoveract at times and treat the audiences like as fools.

"act too hard" would be fine but there's a specific word for this.

Second, rap.


Second,: rap.

A young man with typical Jananese fashion men idols' hair style, which is long and big and most of their eyes are cover by their bangs.


AThere was a young man with a typical Janpanese fashion men idols'able hair style, which is long and, big and with most of their eyes are covered by their bangs.

In the whole series, he only says two dialogues in an emergency in the last episode.


IHe only says two things in the wholentire series, he only says two dialogues and those are during an emergency in the last episode.

What's the most amusing thing is that his subordinate corrects him that he hasn't been in rhyme immediately.


What's tThe most amusing thing is that his subordinate corrects him thatbecause he hasn't been in rhyme immediatelyon cue.

It is a spark of the episode.


It is a sparkhighlight of the episode.

Third, Bollywood element.


Third,: Bollywood element.

There is a lady who can do Capoeira.


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But everytime she shows how to do Capoeira, the BGM is Indian music.


ButHowever, every time that she shows how to do Ccapoeira, the BGMbackground music is Indian music.

BGM isn't a common acronym in English.

So the chief actor makes fun of her, "I thought that you would dance at once, like the Bollywood movies.


So the chiefThe main actor makes fun of her, because of this, saying "I thought that you would dance at once, like the Bollywood movies."

"


Fourth, Japanese wonder girls (girls group).


Fourth,: Japanese wonder girls (girls group).

To be honest, I dislike this kind of music.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think their target audiences are men especially the geeks, through titillating.


I think their target audiences are is men, especially the geeks, throughfor the purpose of titillationg.

Maybe there are more elements I didn't recognise.


Maybe there arThere may be more elements that I didn't recognise.

But I sincerely recommend the show to you all.


But IIn all, I would sincerely recommend the show to you all.

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