Jan. 3, 2022
The night of new years eve
The night of new years eve began slow. I picked up my girlfriend at the train station and we went back home on foot. We walked approximately 30 minutes and on our way, we bought some french fries with cheese sauce at burger king.
We only stopped when we had found a cozy wall where we sat down on top of it, and ate our french fries. Afterward, we proceeded with our walk on the promenade till we arrived at my home. Subsequently, we packed our stuff in my bag which was so heavy that when we arrived at my friend's place I got heavy backache. As some guests already arrived we mingled under the folk and talked with them. As more and more guests arrived, I started to get bored. I really don't know why it was the case, as normally I start to strive when there are more and more people to which I can lunge out. However, we started to drink some beverages and also played some beer pong. As the clock was slowly ticking to the point of midnight I convinced the crowd to get outside. We brought the music box with us and went to a big parking lot which we had all to ourselves. I quite enjoyed the time outside. We did a lot of stuff which got me joyful. After the new year began we stayed lurking in the parking lot. We played a lot of games. For instances a game called beerball. In this game, the crowd gets separated into two teams. These teams are facing each other in a short distance.
In the middle between the two teams stands a plastic bottle that is half full with some fluid. The teams need to throw a ball on the bottle, and when the bottle was hit the team got to drink their beer. In this exact same time, the opposing team got to manage to get the ball behind their own line but also has to put the bottle in its original state. It gets more difficult when the distance between the teams gets longer. After 2 am in the morning we went back home cause my girlfriend was very tired.
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The night of nNew yYear's eEve
(The night of n) New yYear's eEve began slowly.
I picked up my girlfriend atfrom the train station and we went back home on foot.
We walked approximately 30 minutes and on our way, we bought some french fries with cheese sauce at burger king.
We only stopped when we had found a cozy wall where we sat down on top of it, and ate our french fries.
Afterwards, we proceeded withcontinued our walk along the promenade untill we arrived at my home.
Subsequently, we packed our stuff in my bag which was so heavy that when we arrived at my friend's place I got heavyhad a bad backache.
As some guests had already arrived, we mingled under the folkamong the guests and talked with them.
As more and more guests arrived, I started to get bored.
I really don't know why it was the casethis happened, as I normally I start to strivefeel livelier when there are more and more people to which I can lunge outpeople I can talk to.
However, we started to drink some beverages and also played some beer pong.
As the clock was slowly ticking to the point ofapproached midnight, I convinced the crowd to geto outside.
We brought the music box with us and went to a big parking lot which we had all to ourselves.
I quite enjoyed the time outside.
We did a lot of stuff which got me joyfulmade me happy.
After the new year began we stayed lurkingstart of the new year we hung around in the parking lot.
We played a lot of games.
For instances, a game called beerball.
In this game, the crowd gets separated into two teams.
These teams are facing each other in at a short distance.
In the middle between the two teams stands a plastic bottle that is half full with some fliquid.
The teams needhave to throw a ball onat the bottle, and when the bottle wais hit the team gothas to drink their beer.
In this exact same time, the opposing team got to managehas to get the ball behind theirits own line but also has to put the bottle in its original state.
It gets more difficult when the distance between the teams gets longerincreases.
After 2 am in the morning we went back home because my girlfriend was very tired.
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The night of new years eve
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The night of new years eve began slow. (The night of |
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I picked up my girlfriend at the train station and we went back home on foot. I picked up my girlfriend |
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We walked approximately 30 minutes and on our way, we bought some french fries with cheese sauce at burger king. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We only stopped when we had found a cozy wall where we sat down on top of it, and ate our french fries. We only stopped when we |
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Afterward, we proceeded with our walk on the promenade till we arrived at my home. Afterwards, we |
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Subsequently, we packed our stuff in my bag which was so heavy that when we arrived at my friend's place I got heavy backache. Subsequently, we packed our stuff in my bag which was so heavy that when we arrived at my friend's place I |
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As some guests already arrived we mingled under the folk and talked with them. As some guests had already arrived, we mingled |
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As more and more guests arrived, I started to get bored. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really don't know why it was the case, as normally I start to strive when there are more and more people to which I can lunge out. I really don't know why |
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However, we started to drink some beverages and also played some beer pong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As the clock was slowly ticking to the point of midnight I convinced the crowd to get outside. As the clock |
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We brought the music box with us and went to a big parking lot which we had all to ourselves. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I quite enjoyed the time outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We did a lot of stuff which got me joyful. We did a lot of stuff which |
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After the new year began we stayed lurking in the parking lot. After the |
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We played a lot of games. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For instances a game called beerball. For instances, a game called beerball. |
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In this game, the crowd gets separated into two teams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These teams are facing each other in a short distance. These teams are facing each other in at a short distance. |
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In the middle between the two teams stands a plastic bottle that is half full with some fluid. In the middle between the two teams stands a plastic bottle that is half full with some |
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The teams need to throw a ball on the bottle, and when the bottle was hit the team got to drink their beer. T |
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In this exact same time, the opposing team got to manage to get the ball behind their own line but also has to put the bottle in its original state. In this |
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It gets more difficult when the distance between the teams gets longer. It gets more difficult when the distance between the teams |
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After 2 am in the morning we went back home cause my girlfriend was very tired. After 2 am |
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Thank you for correcting my letter! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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