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Yesterday,I posted my first essay. A friendly person gave me a correcting and encourage me to have a clear goal. I am so happy about his or her words.
At morning today ,When I drived car on the way to my office, I saw sun that is bright ,and warm in front of car window,I feel good . Work and life is going, tomorrow is the future.

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The next day

Yesterday, I posted my first essantry.

Essay typically means that it is at least a page long - but it is understandable!

A friendly person gave me a correctiong and encouraged me to have a clear goal.

I am so happy about his or her words.

You can also say "their" instead of "his or her"

AtThis morning today ,W, when I drioved my car on the way to my office, I saw sun light that is bright , and warm in front of the car window. I feel good .

The next day


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday,I posted my first essay.


Yesterday, I posted my first essantry.

Essay typically means that it is at least a page long - but it is understandable!

A friendly person gave me a correcting and encourage me to have a clear goal.


A friendly person gave me a correctiong and encouraged me to have a clear goal.

I am so happy about his or her words.


I am so happy about his or her words.

You can also say "their" instead of "his or her"

At morning today ,When I drived car on the way to my office, I saw sun that is bright ,and warm in front of car window,I feel good .


AtThis morning today ,W, when I drioved my car on the way to my office, I saw sun light that is bright , and warm in front of the car window. I feel good .

Work and life is going, tomorrow is the future.


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