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kiwy

July 23, 2021

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The Nature

When I left Auntie's home, I saw a beautiful moon. The clouds were flowing slowly through the moon, and hid the moon behind them. It seemed like they were playing games and having fun. What a splendid night! Nevertheless I wrote the moon last night, I can't help continuing to write about it again.
In my memeries, the moon in summer is always more beautiful. Maybe it is because of the hot weather. Or because it is so blistering in the daytime, I will pay more attention to the night and go outside more frequently to join the nature.
I love the nature. In summer, I love to laying down on the grass to observe the moon and stars at night. I love the breeze to caress my face. In winter, I love to laying on the grass to feel the sunshine in daytime. It makes me warm and peaceful, and sometimes dozy.
I hope the earth will be better deeply. Although I am not optimistic.

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The Nature


When I left Auntie's home, I saw a beautiful moon.


The clouds were flowing slowly through the moon, and hid the moon behind them.


It seemed like they were playing games and having fun.


What a splendid night!


Nevertheless I wrote the moon last night, I can't help continuing to write about it again.


In my memeries, the moon in summer is always more beautiful.


Maybe it is because of the hot weather.


Or because it is so blistering in the daytime, I will pay more attention to the night and go outside more frequently to join the nature.


I love the nature.


In summer, I love to laying down on the grass to observe the moon and stars at night.


I love the breeze to caress my face.


In winter, I love to laying on the grass to feel the sunshine in daytime.


It makes me warm and peaceful, and sometimes dozy.


I hope the earth will be better deeply.


Although I am not optimistic.


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