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The my past memorie

The first day that i went to Kyk dorm . I was very exticed so i will see new places,people and everthing . Mu father left me with the car. And the day was orientation day. İ didn’t know how I go to the university but I knew I could find to ask someone . I got on a bus and I went to Ankara from Golbasi . By the way my dorm is in Gölbaşı . Then I arrived my university and I attended arientation .

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The mMy past memories

You can't use 'the' and 'my' together.

The first day that iI went to Kyk dorm .,

Connect this sentence with the next one.

I was very exticcited sto i will see new places, people, and everything else.

Muy father dropped me off, then he left me with the car.

If you're trying to say that your father gave you the car, then what you typed is correct.

And the day was orientation day.

Some of these sentences should be connected together so that we can better understand the sequence of events.

İI didn’t know how I goto get to the university but I knew I could find to ask someone to ask them.

I got on a bus and I went to Ankara from Golbasi .

By the way, my dorm is in Göolbaşı si.

English doesn't use accent markers, except for the occasional é when we're borrowing French words.

Then, I arrived at my university and I attended aorientation .

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The my past memorie


The mMy past memories

You can't use 'the' and 'my' together.

The first day that i went to Kyk dorm .


The first day that iI went to Kyk dorm .,

Connect this sentence with the next one.

I was very exticed so i will see new places,people and everthing .


I was very exticcited sto i will see new places, people, and everything else.

Mu father left me with the car.


Muy father dropped me off, then he left me with the car.

If you're trying to say that your father gave you the car, then what you typed is correct.

And the day was orientation day.


And the day was orientation day.

Some of these sentences should be connected together so that we can better understand the sequence of events.

İ didn’t know how I go to the university but I knew I could find to ask someone .


İI didn’t know how I goto get to the university but I knew I could find to ask someone to ask them.

I got on a bus and I went to Ankara from Golbasi .


I got on a bus and I went to Ankara from Golbasi .

By the way my dorm is in Gölbaşı .


By the way, my dorm is in Göolbaşı si.

English doesn't use accent markers, except for the occasional é when we're borrowing French words.

Then I arrived my university and I attended arientation .


Then, I arrived at my university and I attended aorientation .

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