Oct. 26, 2021
The Movie, Dune
Last week, I saw a movie called Dune.
Its story is based on Dune novel especially a half part of the book No. 1.
The story is about conflict between noble houses and the emperor.
The main character runs away by betraying, and hide with his mother in the desert.
During this trip, many people helps them to escape.
The main character gets through all fear and pain of his inside.
When he finally overcomes them, He starts to realize that he is a Messiah.
The movie ends at this part, so it is a little weird if you don’t know the full story.
Alternatively, I am so impressed the beautiful scenes and graphic.
Background music which is composed by Hans Zimmer who is one of my favorite composers, is also great.
I will watch it again in an IMAX theater if I have a chance.
The Movie,: Dune
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Last week, I saw a movie called "Dune".
Use apostrophes for movie titles.
Its story is based on the "Dune" novel, especially athe first half part of the book No.
1.
The story is about a conflict between noble houses and the emperor.
The main character runs away by betraying, and hideing with his mother in the desert.
betraying whom?
During this trip, many people helps them to escape.
The main character gets through alover all of his internal fear and pain of his inside.
"of is inside" is not correct, use the word "internal" to describe his fear and pain.
When he finally overcomes them, Hhe starts to realize that he is a Messiah.
lowercase for pronouns such as "he"
The movie ends at this paroint, so it is a little weird if you don’t know the full story.
AlternativelyOn the other hand, I am sovery impressed with the beautiful scenes and graphicspecial effects.
I know what you mean by "graphics" but we use graphics when talking about video games for instance, not movies. Movies use the term "special effects"
BThe ackground music, which is composed by Hans Zimmer who is (one of my favorite composers), is also great.
I will watch it again in an IMAX theater if I have a chance.
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Your English is good, just need to be careful about phrases that sound awkward in English.
Oct. 28, 2021
Thank you very much. Actually, this topic is quite hard for me to describe. I am able to understand what sentences are suitable.
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Last week, I saw a movie called Dune. Last week, I saw a movie called "Dune". Use apostrophes for movie titles. |
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Its story is based on Dune novel especially a half part of the book No. Its story is based on the "Dune" novel, especially |
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The story is about conflict between noble houses and the emperor. The story is about a conflict between noble houses and the emperor. |
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The main character runs away by betraying, and hide with his mother in the desert. The main character runs away by betraying, and hid betraying whom? |
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During this trip, many people helps them to escape. During this trip, many people help |
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The main character gets through all fear and pain of his inside. The main character gets "of is inside" is not correct, use the word "internal" to describe his fear and pain. |
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When he finally overcomes them, He starts to realize that he is a Messiah. When he finally overcomes them, lowercase for pronouns such as "he" |
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The movie ends at this part, so it is a little weird if you don’t know the full story. The movie ends at this p |
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Alternatively, I am so impressed the beautiful scenes and graphic.
I know what you mean by "graphics" but we use graphics when talking about video games for instance, not movies. Movies use the term "special effects" |
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Background music which is composed by Hans Zimmer who is one of my favorite composers, is also great.
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I will watch it again in an IMAX theater if I have a chance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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