July 18, 2021
The most significant transportation innovation
With the developing technology of the past 200 years many modes of transportation appeared. Although each means of transportation is very important according to its use, airplanes are at the front of these transportation vehicles. Because airplanes have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles.
First of all, he most significant feature of airplane is speed. With the invention of the airplane, the journey that would take days with cars is reduces to a few hours. Therefore, people can save their time and can visit their loved ones who live far away whenever they want. To give an example, it takes about 24 hours to drive from Turkey to Germany. And traveling 24 hours without a break is really tiring and wearing. But thanks to the plane, I can go to Germany in 3 hours comfortably without getting tired. This is really big chance for me.
Another important point is that the planes are more comfortable. Traveling from one country to another, or even to another continent, takes a lot of time. Also, people need to be more comfortable on these long journeys. In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. People can sleep comfortably, eat, use the toilet, and watch movies even on long journeys. In other words, airplanes are designed for passengers to travel comfortably.
Another important advantage is that airplanes are most safety transportation mode. Studies show that, the lowest accident risk is seen on airplane trips. That's why people travel by feeling safe.
As a result, the most significant means of transport for me are airplanes because of the advanteges it has. Thanks to airplane, the farthest places turn into the nearest places.
With the developing technologytechnological developments of the past 200 years, many modes of transportation have appeared.
Although each means of transportation is very important according to its use, airplanes are at the front of these transportation vehicles because they have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles.
Didn't want to make too many direct corrections because the grammar's only a little off, but the word choice made this sentence a bit difficult to read. I'd suggest something like "Although each means of transportation has its own important uses, airplanes are the most important of all because of their many additional advantages over other public transportation vehicles."
Because airplanes have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles.
This is a dependent clause; it can't be its own sentence. (I combined it into the previous sentence.)
First of all, the most significant feature of airplanes is speed.
With the invention of the airplane, thea journey that would take days with a cars i was reducesd to a few hours.
Therefore, people can save their time and can visit their loved ones who live far away whenever they want.
To give an example, it takes about 24 hours to drive from Turkey to Germany.
And traveling 24 hours without a break is really tiring and wearing.
But thanks to the plane, I can go to Germany in 3 hours comfortably without getting tired.
This is really big chance for me.
Not sure "chance" is the right word here. Maybe something about being important/valuable fits better?
Another important point is that the planes are more comfortable.
Traveling from one country to another, or even to another continent, takes a lot of time.
Also, people need to be more comfortable on these long journeys.
In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation.
In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation.
People can sleep comfortably, eat, use the toilet, and watch movies even on long journeys.
In other words, airplanes are designed for passengers to travel comfortably.
Another important advantage is that airplanes are mostthe safetyst mode of transportation mode.
Studies show that, the lowest accident risk is seen on airplane trips.
That's why people can travel bywhile feeling safe.
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Thanks to airplane, the farthest places turn into the nearest places.
July 19, 2021
Thank you very much ☺️
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The most significant transportation innovation |
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With the developing technology of the past 200 years many modes of transportation appeared. With the |
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Although each means of transportation is very important according to its use, airplanes are at the front of these transportation vehicles. Although each means of transportation is very important according to its use, airplanes are at the front of these transportation vehicles because they have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles. Didn't want to make too many direct corrections because the grammar's only a little off, but the word choice made this sentence a bit difficult to read. I'd suggest something like "Although each means of transportation has its own important uses, airplanes are the most important of all because of their many additional advantages over other public transportation vehicles." |
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Because airplanes have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles.
This is a dependent clause; it can't be its own sentence. (I combined it into the previous sentence.) |
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First of all, he most significant feature of airplane is speed. First of all, the most significant feature of airplanes is speed. |
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With the invention of the airplane, the journey that would take days with cars is reduces to a few hours. With the invention of the airplane, |
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Therefore, people can save their time and can visit their loved ones who live far away whenever they want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To give an example, it takes about 24 hours to drive from Turkey to Germany. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And traveling 24 hours without a break is really tiring and wearing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But thanks to the plane, I can go to Germany in 3 hours comfortably without getting tired. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is really big chance for me. This is really big chance for me. Not sure "chance" is the right word here. Maybe something about being important/valuable fits better? |
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Another important point is that the planes are more comfortable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Traveling from one country to another, or even to another continent, takes a lot of time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, people need to be more comfortable on these long journeys. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People can sleep comfortably, eat, use the toilet, and watch movies even on long journeys. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In other words, airplanes are designed for passengers to travel comfortably. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another important advantage is that airplanes are most safety transportation mode. Another important advantage is that airplanes are |
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Studies show that, the lowest accident risk is seen on airplane trips. Studies show that |
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That's why people travel by feeling safe. That's why people can travel |
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As a result, the most significant means of transport for me are airplanes because of the advanteges it has. As a result, the |
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Thanks to airplane, the farthest places turn into the nearest places. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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